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Review Detail of traceeee in Star Wars: Skywalker

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There is just to much info dump that it gets mind numbing reading it and it can even be repetitive and Mc ascension among the jedi was way to fast i mean seriously 1 mission you won't even see if the mc can do those consistently or how he would deal with setbacks and failures. Because of the massive info dumps I can't even remember any meaningful character development even the relationship of the mc be it friendship or love gets overshadowed because of this. I feel this would've been a really good fic if you focus more on the story rather than info I stopped reading around chapter 85

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