Scarletheart84
I don't know what to say. Truthfully I've always been quite neutral and passive to LGBT and I've only read a few but I have to say. Among all the books I've read, Your's easily tops it all. The grammar is nigh perfect You are very adept in the know-how of conveying characters emotions and body languages to readers And Chapter 1 and 2, with the accident scene, made me very interested. I'll surely read more of this 5 stars to you author🙂🙂
Damn, the meaning of the word 'love' was shown clearly. Every chapter has it's unique way of representing Xian and Judi's love. The way they loved and how much the earth waited for his moon made me cry. Even I read only 20 chapters I loved every chapter more than before one. Excellent job author, wow
This story is not hard to read but a bit tasking because there were a lot of exclamation marks! I feel like the characters thoughts get screamed to the readers and sometimes disarms me as a reader. The general plot is nice but the author needs to work on giving the readers a clear flow of reading. The author also needs to work on the dialogue as sometimes it can get repetitive. You're a talented writer with a lot of great potentials, keep up the good work🌹
What first caught my attention is the back cover of the novel which comprises of my two favorite actors from THE UNTAMED .Though the picture isn't clear but I was sure it was them.Then after digging into the novel I was so captivated by the novel and the Author writing skills. The novel felt so real,some parts are sad🥺🥺 and it broke my tender💔💔 heart. Nonetheless it's a very interesting🙂🙂 novel and highly recommended 💜💜💜💜🤣