This story is not hard to read but a bit tasking because there were a lot of exclamation marks! I feel like the characters thoughts get screamed to the readers and sometimes disarms me as a reader. The general plot is nice but the author needs to work on giving the readers a clear flow of reading. The author also needs to work on the dialogue as sometimes it can get repetitive. You're a talented writer with a lot of great potentials, keep up the good work🌹
Scarletheart84
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