Reviews of Second World
Second World
UnrivaledArcaner
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
So far so good until the MC let two rapists of a large guild go after intervening while the victim killed the third rapist. This happened pretty early on and got a lot of criticism in the comments, so I'm asking here if the MC gets smarter or still commits these naive, low-level mistakes?
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Till the MC got fairy which happens around chapter 28 ? it was great read after that MC turns to a retard and while in past, he could kill who crossed him but now he is risking his life to find a stranger's mother ? instead of grinding to get stronger he decided to camp in safe spot ? With dual class and dual stats, he could only fight another player to standstill...... MC is a white night with hamster for brain. Skip. Initial chapters are pretty good even tho world building and logic was not strong yet character of MC kept it glued .
I just have one problem concerning the MC... When he fights guilds that want to KILL HIM, the MC sometimes will decide to spare some people like as if they will spare him during the night or not come and fight him again, such an idiot( and really the MC is an idiot). And again the players don't die so why is the MC bloody sparing them. Sometimes I wonder what's the use of the intelligence stat and wisdom stat.
Everything in this story is structured like a D&D campaign. It's a great book if you want a kick a$$ MC who starts off dull but becomes so much better in the later stages. This story in my opinion is one of the best. Even the author replies and fixes things wrong like spelling errors unlike most other authors that don't actually love there story enough to fix anything with it. UnraveledArcaner really did great but there work just isn't advertised enough for people to see and help support him... I really hope at some point people start seeing the potential in this story and read enough that they will get hooked like me.
This novel describes me exactly the kind of life that an MC would have before its reincarnation 🤔 You know, when you have to learn from human nature by bad xD, an interesting premise so far (cap 101) without golden finger on rotated, although the MC you want To kill his good personality in the Cra CA Da time he is a benevolent in naive. Anyway thanks until now.
Thus story is one of the best I read. The writing quality is top notch you can understand it perfectly even if English isn't your first language. The story development is insane I have read so many novels they get one item then they forget about it for the rest of the story which in this story it isn't the case. Character Design is good too you think they're your close friend because they describe them in so much detail, but I would like the MC the be more selfish, like when he first got the Egg first think he thought was to give it to his friends. Updating stability... well it's perfect but it would've been so much better if it was more because I'm addicted to this story, but I know it's hard so take your time author. About the world background I only can say one thing which is one of the best I think there is. It's big, detailed and most importantly interesting. He describes it so well that you don't have any problems imagining it. All in all 11/10 for me I love this series I hope it doesn't get canceled. Author I thank you for this novel and thank you for your story telling. I'll look if you have others stories which I'll 100% read.
I'm really liking the story! I've read all the way to the 500's and can say that the story has steadily improved. I understand some people's frustration with the MC being either foolish or not perceptive enough outside of fighting, but I think that is a necessary component to prevent him from being a perfect Mary Sue. He has actual flaws that he needs to work on or have other characters help him with.
Best novel to read got good plot ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing Quality: I think this is passable. no noticeable mistakes, more show don't tell is better but tbh, because of the wide casts set. it's hard to write concisely. story development: simplistic but fun is what I would give. this is one of those, don't think much and enjoy the ride. there are some turns such as the detective arc which is quite enjoyable character design: people may not like the mc but tbh, he has his charm. he is his own character, very much like others in the story. they hold their own and can make their very own arc. some of them are too simplistic but they're ok. updating stab: better than most novels I enjoy world background not the best but it's on average or better than average, there are several mysteries etc that is worth reading the novel for more exploration.
Honestly at the start for me this story was a 4/5 star read, after reading through all of the posted chapters however, my opinion is completely different. If I had to explain it in a succint manner then it would be that the more you read it the more interesting and engaging it becomes. A great characteristic of the story that I heavily appreciate however is that all of the characters personalities have depth to them, even the antagonists. Summed up I can only say that reading this novel made me feel warm inside as I can 100% guarentee that this will without a doubt be one of the top novels I have ever read. The only thing i can say is to give it a chance as later in the story we will see that the initial benefits that he had gained were in fact not limited to him only. This gif is for the author.
one of the best books that I have been reading on wn . the story progression is well paced and beautifully worked on there is nothing that is forced and plot armour is non existent (a major problem in a lot of bks nowadays) even while the story is progressing forwards there is a huge mystery that is embedded right in its dept which makes it more interesting all characters are unique and charecter development is quite good (exept in the start 50 chs with the mc where his character takes a total turn around but it gets fixed in a few chs it's not that big of an issue tho ) the conversation between the characters is cheeky and humorous totally fun to read and will make laught a lot there are some grammatical mistakes tho mainly in the prepositions used but it's not a problem as u can easily understand and they are far off the start is lil slow ig upto the 60 chs I think the author could have sped that part a bit that's preety much it ig tho I just whish I could time travel and binge read this book 🥺
