Review Detail of Alissa666 in Second World

Everything in this story is structured like a D&D campaign. It's a great book if you want a kick a$$ MC who starts off dull but becomes so much better in the later stages. This story in my opinion is one of the best. Even the author replies and fixes things wrong like spelling errors unlike most other authors that don't actually love there story enough to fix anything with it. UnraveledArcaner really did great but there work just isn't advertised enough for people to see and help support him... I really hope at some point people start seeing the potential in this story and read enough that they will get hooked like me.