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Why is there a mix up with double quotation and single quotation. I do appreciate the double upload tho… or maybe I just forget to read ytd. Pretty sure I did read.
It’s nice to see how much the mc cared for his men.
Ok here’s the thing. I usually only review authors who put in effort and it feels like this author does. So I’ll give a spoiler free review. Writing: too pretentious for my liking. Too many monologues and explaining actions instead of showing actions. However, the language used is great. The dialogues is equally pretentious. But if you like this kind of writing, hey I can’t blame you. I like something that give how the character feels, showing stuffs. I guess it’s the dialogues that really put me off here. But I’ll continue reading because it feels like the author put in effort. Story: it’s alright. Decent so far.
It’s call. I think it’s plausible. Avoid trouble but be resolute and angry. Anger can make people very resolute
Author be like. I make mc too OP so I need him to chill out and be stupid
Reminds me of GOT (both when it’s good and bad), always have wine
What does this mean, announced in his accent. Does he usually speak other accent hahaha.
Reminds me of the new god of war haha
Quite frankly, this should’ve been a full 5 if not because of certain chapters in between the arc that the writing quality slipped and the story suddenly lacks detail but I think the author meant it as a time skip moment but it just felt more awkward if anything. Basically it could’ve been done better. If you like cultivation, read it. It’s good.