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Writing Quality: I think this is passable. no noticeable mistakes, more show don't tell is better but tbh, because of the wide casts set. it's hard to write concisely. story development: simplistic but fun is what I would give. this is one of those, don't think much and enjoy the ride. there are some turns such as the detective arc which is quite enjoyable character design: people may not like the mc but tbh, he has his charm. he is his own character, very much like others in the story. they hold their own and can make their very own arc. some of them are too simplistic but they're ok. updating stab: better than most novels I enjoy world background not the best but it's on average or better than average, there are several mysteries etc that is worth reading the novel for more exploration.

Second World

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Thank you for the review :)