It is a good read where MC is not an idiot and gets overall good development . Power levels are messed up with very weird distinctions but that can be overlooked why 2.5 stars then ? Author loves milking episode where the first half of every episode is copy paste from last..... So 1 star to both update stability and writing quality

MC is supposed to be a cold composed to be mafia leader but instead he acts like a 2 year old with no impulse control . Story till chapter 50 is cliche with overused predictable troops

It is well written story but within first 20 chapters you can see that gow it contrasts itself. Initially MC was about becoming strong and follwowing his hobby and not bowing down or taking family as everything but within 1 year hw became siscon. Acting as a horse for his sister ..... For some reason, MC wants to become strong yet keeps declining opportunity that would make him stronger to act as a horse for bis sisters.... Grandparents oh we will give you training and mana potionsMC: Nah too busy. I need time so I can be horse for ky sister and teach them everything even tho the world is dangerous where strength matters the most ....TLDR: MC is dumb ao if you like Japanese white knight then give it a go else skip it

lmao To know shit, you just need to smell the air and that is good enough warning while people like you need to bathe in shit to realise that something is shit.I am not calling this book shit bit interaction between male and female is cringe. The notion that doing 300 push ups is going to help physique ..... Resistance training vs cardio. Slow twitch vs fast twitch . Things happen based on MC's convenience . It seems artificial ... as if characters have no agency and that MC is the centre of the whole universe . It is not immersive at all.

Read till chapter 5 and... Don't read it you value your braincells No build up, no reasoning ... My parents randomly came ,I barely know them and they gave me this cultivation book so I must do everything for them ...I regret reading this so much

🤷 Story is barely moving . At this point the author is just using the same template to farm chapters .

Details which make no sense. Using words on words, power levels which have never been introduced . Contrasting yourself within the first 14 chapters ( magic can't stay hidden , children show reality bending power) then in the next few chapters oh only noble bloodline can use supernatural . oh legendary get 150 year lifespan , legend is first level but of domain , but in next chapter nop only specific domains can make you live longer .... Ranks have never been introduced, the writing style is annoying and the mystery feels forced instead of having anticipation I am cringing at how hard the author is trying and failing at iy

MC is dumb as in my dog is actually smarter than him . Reading this novel will make you appreciate pretty much every other MC. A guy who only suffered in his last life is super generous to everyone. He is untrained for the actual fight, his mentality is nothing short of goldfish. He is shouting that a random soldier needs healing while he is in middle of fight and his summon saved him. Instead of fighting he is saving random kids and people ..... I could not take it beyond chapter 20

MC is supposed to be 28 year old reincarnate but he is more childish than the other kids and his experience is pretty much useless ......

It is a 2.5 star novel. The only things salvaging this novel is the frequency of updates, writing quality and how bad competition is .i have read till chapter 150ish but the story appears to be a wish fulfilment where MC gets everything on a silver spoon.He has mentality of some emo edgy teenager instead of some old man who has seen through thick and thin who knows how to put on a fake mask. An MC which thinks it is cool to be arrogant and rude . The only thing which keeps hus alive is plot Armour His whole personality is 2d cardboard and same can be said for pretty much everyone else. Only that book / pendant has some slight personality to it.TLDR: You will find the story to be 2 dimensional ( 1 to be exact but it is bearable as a quick stop gap to keep you going till you find something good.

TBH in any real life scenario, Shang would have been put down like rabid dog .

It is cringe.... Nepolian complex in chapter 12 or pride in his family name in chapter 13.... He is asking a being who is much superior to any human that his family name is something she should trust ........ Then his emotional outbursts. More cringe in later chapters alongside cliche troops and filler chapters

huh ? I read way more than 20 chapters. I think I stopped sometime after that old monk died and the god started talking to him. I am not sure why you would make this assumption ? are you too biased or perhaps are inflicted with " I will lick author's feet" disease or just have bad taste ?

can't he simply send a message warning him . This way he will at least be able to save his neck

No character development .... Rather a man saying that loving someone gives you the reason to accept death ? Is it not the opposition .... weird logic

More like thanks to strong plot armour and power level all over the floor . At one time, he is a threat to the upper level then a weak insect to them then again he is a threat .....

You are only right about one thing and that is good writing quality. Story is of typical character with plot armour .... Plot armour is way over used. He is not smart at all. He risks himself for no reason and gets used by church while getting nothing in return. Then " must abstain" BS . Have read till 250 and I

The story is well written with a holy knight / anti hero cliche where MC knows he has plot armour , and plot armour is over used more than what you would find in a typical chinese novel. He risks his life for no reason in the later chapter . The church is giving him nothing yet he stays a loyal dog or " he will be killed " or how he is assured to die if he doesn't promise to marry but he still says " oh no church will kill me if I do" .... like he is not going to die now. He keeps abstaining by saying that he is really old . MC has no desire rather a forced plot development . Then he barely trains even when he says he must . Man train instead of wasting money on church missions. He is supposed to be smart but to me he appears a dumb wanna be hero with no inking of what or how real life works.

Oh btw MC acts like he has plot armour Seeking death by blood something 2 times while being under powdered

Stop reading then ? I don't see any issue here. Rather I find it funny