RWBY: Remnant’s Outsider

Loved this book Would de definitely recommend this , Infact whenever I’m bored I just come back and stare at this masterpiece… cheers to the brilliant writer 🥂

Guy.... Nice. Your brain must be something beautiful. I enjoyed the mix of both worlds. And how you adjusted them to fit your standards without damaging their beauty. Respect man.

It's a decent story but there are a lot of things I have problems in it that made stop reading. He's mentally older than the kids around his age but he is so immature that he is as impulsive as a regular child. He's shown to be smartest one in his class which isn't really a high achievement but he's acts like a kid unintentionally that you'd honestly think he died as a child. Unnecessary edginess. It's easy to notice how forced it is when he is having a good life but acts like Sasuke, his clan didn't get killed because he doesn't have a brother. He has no reason to be so edgy. The fights in his school and his fight against Adam shows that despite being older than them mentally, he's still as immature as the children around him.

Eh its ok. Ive read 17 chapters and am still having to read about a 6 year old child so thats kinda annoying and boring ngl. I hate stories that drag out the childhood needlessly. There is not, and never will be anything cool about a 6 year olds adventures lol hopefully the time skip happens soon. (P.S. the MC seems a bit intellectually challenged in the beginning but i think he gets better)

All I can say is wow Kudous to the writer Keep up the good stories , I’m proud of the progress you’ve made ,cheers to more and more capitving chapters💞✨🥂

Read till Chapter 23. Writing quality - 5/5 - Good writing quality. Story Development - 5/5 - Great story Development. He started out as drowning in his good life, I had thought 'is this slice of life or something?' then he started showing a power hungry side (mostly to live peacefully with his mother and protect her). With introduction of Ashton, it looks like Indra (MC) and Asura (Ashton) are back. Character Design - 5/5 - MC only cares for his mother and gaining power to protect her. Anything apart from that seems to irritate him. He does not have any true friend uptil Chapter 23. Way better than a Harem seeking protagonist or MC that thinks with his lower head. Updating Stability - 3/5 - .... World background - 5/5 - RWBY world is decent enough for me Overall - 4.6/5.0 - All things said would like to see MC have atleast a few true comrades.

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This is a rwby masterpiece. the characters, the plot, the way the uchiha and canon characters were written is perfect, thanks for the work.

All around amazing I’ve been following your books and i just cant get enough of them , Most especially this one and “into the naruto world” The author has such a creative mind and knows how to Express it into words Keep it up🥂

EXTREMELY GOOD so far. good job 👍 Yoshikage Kira. I’m 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don’t smoke, but I occasionally drink. I’m in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn’t lose to anyone.

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Eeh, it's pretty alright, but that's all there is to this book. Solid writing, with no noticeable mistakes. Story's also okay, but nothing praiseworthy either. There're some really edgy moments which are unneeded and the mc's character and background sometimes feel like it was pieced together from random ideas. But the biggest turnoff for me would be the mc's character. He acts like a friggin' brat despite being a reincarnator, a 16 year-old teenager before. There's also a system which feels like it was added there for the sake of convenience - it wasn't consistent enough. 3.0 final score.

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Pretty good I like it. It’s a sold read, and it’s story isn’t bad.

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It is very interesting story! I wait for every chapter!)))))) At first I found it interesting because of first chapters about the reason of life and death. Sorry for my english)

love the story so dat its Just anoying the you spent waaaaay tot long in the childhood ARC in here for a RWBY story not a hey lats spend 4 months writing about a childhood story. bit I still like it