Review Detail of Monsieur_Dreamer in RWBY: Remnant’s Outsider

It's a decent story but there are a lot of things I have problems in it that made stop reading. He's mentally older than the kids around his age but he is so immature that he is as impulsive as a regular child. He's shown to be smartest one in his class which isn't really a high achievement but he's acts like a kid unintentionally that you'd honestly think he died as a child. Unnecessary edginess. It's easy to notice how forced it is when he is having a good life but acts like Sasuke, his clan didn't get killed because he doesn't have a brother. He has no reason to be so edgy. The fights in his school and his fight against Adam shows that despite being older than them mentally, he's still as immature as the children around him.