Shiza_Mumtaz
It's... just... so... DISTURBINGLY.......................... BEAUTIFUL. There were literally no grammar error and I'm at chap 12 (I dare you to find one🙄💅) the character development is 😚💋💥👌 EMACULATE! but😐 that house keeper UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES WOULD I EVER TRUST HER! I don't want to spoil it but... her first introduction was enough for me to not trust her. I'm sorry but darling👩🌾 you gotta go.🏃🏻♀️💨🔫😐. ASAP! no rocky 😐 Also the LOVE of money can really corrupt people. Money is just currency (paper, coins etc) Basically stay somewhere between poor and rich. it's best for your mental state Also when Ali ate that man's LIVER... I guess you can say he needs to go to Church and get some... wait for it... de-LIVER-ance 🚪🏃💨🤺 I'm sorry 😔 BUT! (not another 🙄) trust me this one's even better.😏 Let's hope that Ali doesn't get a Job at Amazon or U**... (if this jokes sucks I'm stabbing you😐) damn no need to threaten me... so anyway... I hope Ali doesn't ever work at Amazon so he doesn't have to... de-LIVER packages 😏 😐🔪😨💥💥💥💥⚰️👻 was this review long? yes was it interesting? yes am I somewhat constipated? wait what!? that's none of your business 😐 anyways this is a really fun book 🙂👍
Am such a slow reader, I would have given this review sooner. This is what I like to read on online reading apps. The characters aren't that fast paced and the story line is unique, which I admire. The Author is on point. But the paragraphs could be shortened to gain the attention of readers better. Aside that, this book is really one in a million.
If there is anything I've learned after reading this novel, it is to not cover things too much. And if there is anything that I have to say about this book, it would be this... Grammar? Check! Suspense? Check! Thrilling? Check! Right amount of intrigue and a little gory? Check! I'm personally a sucker for Hulu stories and this is my cup of coffee so I'm sticking around for more.
first of all, I really appreciate you effort you put into the story. In my opinion, you portray the character clearly from the beginning, I could see various expressions from the writing and it was really good. I think you've done a great job. Keep writing and update more! I am also an author. Please kindly check out my newest novel, Ingeniosus Snilldech Academy! Thank you, I'd really appreciate it :D
The first few chapters are really magnificently well-written with vibrant words and intricate descriptions. It brings me closer to the scene where the maid makes an entrance in the story-even accidentally scaring Asia off from her bed! There are a few points that I must voice out. You have a keen bank of words that can bring the life from the story. However, it will be even better if you could check their grammars (such as commas, passive voice misuse, etc.) Great Story, and keep up the good work!
I like of same in fond of this book. A really pretty maid and then the stubborn MC, haha couldn't stop laughing. I barely read two chapters by laughing. it's really fun. I really give all my best to this author for writing such a good and easy understanding story. The explains are good. And the best one is the character. Feel this book is going to be outstanding. Go for it author!! You can do it=-O=-O:-)
At first, I was confuse on the summary so I went ahead on chapter one. I feel intrigued about that mysterious beauty in chapter one that applied as a maid and I thought it's romance but when I saw the tags...it's horror and I want to know what will happen next. Keep up! ^_^ P.S. Just one more thing, It would be better if the summary is describe neatly and put something that can hook the audience. That's only my opinion ^_^
Wow! This book is so well written. It has some horror incidents in the first few chapters and you can imagine it as if it was happening in front of you. That's how amazing the author is with her words. Definitely a great book to be added to the library and read till it is completed. Great work, author 👏❤️