first of all, I really appreciate you effort you put into the story. In my opinion, you portray the character clearly from the beginning, I could see various expressions from the writing and it was really good. I think you've done a great job. Keep writing and update more! I am also an author. Please kindly check out my newest novel, Ingeniosus Snilldech Academy! Thank you, I'd really appreciate it :D
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