empressblackrose09
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LOL your thoughts are way too hilarious xD
The novel is really interesting. A very detailed about the world-building and how the characters interact with each other are unique. For me, it got the Divergent-vibe to me the way how the plot goes on. Keep up on writing! ^_^ My only advice was about your synopsis. Might as well you tone-down a bit because it's too long or much better put a vague description on it so that readers would be curious on how your story goes on. That's all for now. Add this to my library. ^_^
Talk about waking up in the middle of a warzone xD
What a massive world-building you have! I haven't read that far but the details are so great that you can immerse yourself inside the plot. Just imagine that you are also one of the characters there. Keep writing for more! ^_^
Bravo! I am loving this story as goes by... ^_^
Well, I agree. Not just for any creatures but sometimes humans as well. You know...
I am not sure for the romance part since this novel is just the beginning and if I would put romance to it, I think it would be a sub-romance though. As for the harem part, no. I can assure you that there will be nothing like the usual harem trope. Not really sure for now though.
It's too early for me to say this but I can tell you that the MC is an anti-hero but not to the point that he would do villainous deeds without reasons. ^_^ Also, thank you for leaving a review! I'll do my best to update more chapters ^_^
Thank you! ^_^
Wow! The date! xD xD xD
First of all, I love your book cover! This will help you drawn new readers because of how cool it looks however, I suggest that you may add some at least a little filler on it that would make it like a 'wow' factor if new readers would see it. ^_^ Second, your synopsis. It can be considered part of a prologue or chapter 01 because it's too long. I suggest that you may summarize it or make it short. Put a little vague detail on it but not too much so that your readers would be curious on how the story of the plot goes on. Third and last. The plot. I get it that this might be the usual amnesiac MC that got thrown to another world (harsh word for to be thrown xD xD xD) but even if that is the case, I like how you put an effort to the plot and the interaction of Milo and Lok that seems like a natural to me. Keep writing! ^_^