I can see this story is giving a kind of mystery like a scattered puzzle that eventually readers need to find the exact place and that is how you write a mystery! The author has done a great job. Grammatical errors are fine as long as it's understandable for the story. I've done a lot too and learned from that experience. I hope you keep updated on this novel and reached the top! *added to fav

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Wahhh keren banget cerita inii. Aku suka cerita kayak gini menurut aku ini seru banget! Aku suka gimana awalnya author ngejelasin tentang cupid. Yang sebenernya aku juga suka baca cerita - cerita yunani. Ini cocok banget buat aku! Semangat authoorr! Seru banget ceritanyaa... <3

wahhh seru banget ceritanyaa! baru awal baca udah ketawa banget haha 😂 keren banget pokoknya! Terus teknik penulisannya bagus dan menarik sekali. good job thor!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

thanks for the review 😘

Thank youu 🥰

What an exciting story!!! I love this. This is definitely the book I liked to start my weekend! Thank you very much author, you've made my day. Looking forward to the upcoming chapterss!

I love how the author the story. Besides the interesting plot, I also enjoy the expression in each conversation as well. I think it's creative to give the emotion through that. I would definitely read this further, thank you. great job!!!

I think this book will be popular. The story have a good detail and very interesting. I think I would keep reading this book, add this to my colls. There is a few grammatical mistake but it's understandable. but overall it's amazing. can't wait to read more!

Okay, I'll work on this. Thank you so much for the feedback

fyi, I really liked a story with a Japanese background. The characteristic of the event and even the character are explained really well. It was a necessary move for a novel that required readers to imagine. I think this story will hit a lot of readers and I've gladly added it to my collection. I look forward to the story updates. Please update more <3

This novel really had great potential. I am also an author and this is a bit familiar with the story I recently worked on but this story had more conflict and intensity. Which is very good and interesting. I can easily imagine the conflict through the writing which is very helpful for me who is a fast reader. Keep up the good work!

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Thank you! I'll update more chapter soon!

Straight to the greatest point on the story. The world design is unique and how the author describe it in such a detail is impressive. Other than that, I think there is nothing to worry about. The story is fun and intriguing. I would read it and add it to my colls. Great job, author!

Honestly, I've 5 chapters of this novel and I thought this story has a good plot. I can see the author done a lot of research and more importantly is this story reflecting a few points that happen in real life. I always thought that story that requires research is difficult and I probably never gonna make that, If I were maybe it's not that good tho. But, once again this is great. Oh, I love the book cover. Veeeeeryy much!. as for the synopsis, It was a good one but I think you can work on it and make it more interesting for those who haven't read your book. Oh, and please kindly check out my novel, Ingeniosus Snilldech Academy. Thank you! -love

ALL TRUE !!!

Wah, bagus banget cerita ini, aku jadi inget, "Apapun yang kita rencana kan gak semuanya selalu terjadi dan bisa aja itu jadi hal yang enggak terduga buat kita". Cerita ini mengingatkan aku soal hal itu dan memang itu benar. Ada perjuangan juga di setiap jalan yang kita pilih, itulah hal yang dilakukan oleh ML di cerita ini.