YoanRoturier
This is a well-written piece of fantasy with beautiful descriptions. Till what I've read, there's focus on a single character and he's well sketched out, but minor interjections from other characters gave me an understanding of what to expect and I have to say, I liked how they're depicted. The author has mentioned that the development in the first three chapters is fast, but I think that's only true if you consider the flow of time. Otherwise, there are detailed descriptions of survival, and there is a focus on character development.
I normally don't read fantasy books because I feel like I won't connect with it but your book was different and a great first reading experience for my first fantasy book. I love the way you play with your words, writers here are so good I feel inferior with my writing, that was how good your book was. I love your description prowess, it is so vivid and clear, I could learn from that. You deserve a five star rating and more🤩
I am so happy your writing this. Reading this story brings me a lot of joy, I am enjoying this story on the same level if not more than cultivation online. I hope you continue writing this, and know I am depositing my two power stones a day here, for a good story that deserves it. I hope this book gets really popular.
I absolutely love this story. Aito is a realistic and relatable character. The story is very well thought out and well-paced. Jack is Awesome!❤️ The world building is exceptional, and I love that the Author shows us the MC’s story, and the side characters get their turn in the spotlight too, without deviating from the main storyline. I have spotted a few errors, but the author is constantly editing and improving his materpiece, so I did not take away a star. The story more than earned that back with it’s quality. Thank you so much for my new addiction❤️👏🏻🍾