The_divine_oracle
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The_divine_oracle5mthPostedThis is an initial review, and it's worth noting that there aren't many chapters available as of yet. I do plan to revisit my thoughts as the story unfolds, but I couldn't resist sharing my initial impressions. This book is truly outstanding. The author's ability to vividly describe actions and evoke deep emotions creates an immersive experience, almost like watching a captivating movie. Each character is a multi-dimensional and finely-crafted personality, making them incredibly relatable.Regarding the story and world-building, there's a lot more to uncover, but the glimpses I've seen suggest a rich and expansive world, with a pervasive sense of mystery that grabs your attention right from the very first chapter. I sincerely hope this book garners the recognition it deserves. The author's work is commendable, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more chapters to dive deeper into this captivating tale.
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The zombie's got some 'dead-ly' moves
Horror gripped Lila, freezing her in place. The noise pierced her like a searing needle as she tried to comprehend what she had just witnessed. "Martial arts?" she uttered in disbelief. - The_divine_oracle5mthReplied to wewa_cat
😂
And there, before her, stood another figure—a figure that chilled her to the bone. It was a zombie, its rotten flesh clinging to skeletal bones, its vacant eyes staring into the abyss. - The_divine_oracle5mthCommented
Nice going! It's playing out like a movie
The violent collision sent them hurtling toward the opposite wall, their impact shattering the wooden cupboard. Lila felt as though a sledgehammer had been driven into her back, and the taste of metallic blood filled her mouth. Dust and debris rained down upon them, momentarily blinding her. Her arms, however, never wavered, desperately fending off the mutant's gnashing teeth, its foul saliva dripping onto her skin. Cracks spidered along the crossbow under the mutant's teeth. Its jagged nails dug deep into her flesh, pulling her closer, and Lila screamed in agony. Panic surged through her veins as she struggled to keep the abomination at bay. - The_divine_oracle5mthCommented
Nice description!
The lift doors stood ajar, the interior a tangled mass of cables and debris, its once sleek chrome surfaces now corroded and rusted. Marcus and Lila passed by it, avoiding the precarious path it offered. The elevator's roof had collapsed, like a wounded beast, incapable of carrying them to their destination. - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
Nice escape plan 👍
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That's way too much credit 😂
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I wonder what Goroks plan to escape the super max prison was? Run with the boulder? 😅
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You are the only prisoner and a legendary figure. None of them sound as a reason to have tight security. I wonder why you can't escape too 😂
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You need to start counting the seconds too. It'll keep your mind off the failed attempts
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Calling yourself legendary? Narcissist much? 😅
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What else did you expect? Salarymen?
But for some, they stopped listening when they heard "you have free will to do as you please"!!!! - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
Well, it's not his first and won't be the last. I feel sorry for the guards 😂
Thus, the escape attempt of this prisoner came to a blank, sorry end. - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
I've never seen a sickly human do that. forget that. I've never seen the most muscular human do that 🤣
"He was still wearing his bounds. I thought they were power-limiting. He's supposed to be as weak as a sickly human... how is he still this strong." - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
Isn't he immortal?
The guards had half a mind to leave him there to continue getting crushed a while longer, but then their orders were to keep the prisoner alive, so they moved to help. - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
Noo! Where's the revenge of the fallen ?
"Quick! Take me back in!", - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
Had you not been immortal, you would have been dead long ago. At least that's the feeling I get 😅
For every second he remained out there, more of his bones were crushed. Had he not been immortal, he would be dead right now. - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
What did you replace your fingers with? Wolverine claws? 😅
The prisoner lunged himself forward, using the weight of the boulder to swing himself closer towards the gates with one hand, and latching onto the ceiling with his other hand; digging into fortified titanium with his fingers like they are claws. - The_divine_oracle2yrCommented
With your favourite boulder dangling below you, I'm sure it will be easy 😂
One more lunge and he would be on the gates. He would wait, hanging unto the ceiling by one hand for however long it would take until the guards outside opened the gates to come in from the outside to help search for him.