Reviews of Prime Originator

I read about 20 chapters and I can't stand to read any more, the script convenience is huge and the story has more holes than a Swiss cheese.

I quite like the general idea of the story. I also kinda like that the fact that the translation is not that bad. The idea of the powers is great and some twists. Now for the things I didnt like. The plot while amusing was all over the place. It was going quite well when the MC was going to school but then it was overlapped with another crisis. Right then its just one problem over the other. The story couldve gone better if each problem was introduced and solved through each arc. Seperating the School Arc, Civil War Arc, and the Invasion Arc but no. What we read in the story was just one problem after the other with no proper organization. There were so many forgotten issues just from ch 1 to 120+ some were: what happened to the deal with Lynn Cromwell and his grandfather before, during and after the invasion, What happened to the other school members and many more. Basically many details were skipped because our dear author here overlappes one crisis after another without complete thought.

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 24/01/2021 @chap631 review divided in: Short review Long review Ratings Conclusion short review: Full of cliches and entertainment long review: pros: 1) Mc doesn't get strong too fast just for the sake of plot. 2) cultivation system is pretty good. 3) even tho it's full of cliches it's neither boring nor frustrating. cons: 1) as said earlier, full of cliches. Those who are bored of cliches this is really not for you 2) early chapters harem was too fast!! Later chapters harem is too slow!! 3) little to no romance RATINGS: writing: 8/10 update: 9/10 plot: 7/10 characters: 7/10 pacing: 8/10 dialogues: 8/10 entertainment: 9/10 OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion: Those who came for plot continue reading... Those who came for search of harem just read 100 chaps and stop it.. Those who came for romance do not enter

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One of the best novels ive ever read. Cant wait for more.ndjdjjdjdkdkxkxkxkxkxkxkxkxnxnnxnxnxnxjfjdjdjdjdjjdjdjsksmdjsjdjdmdmjsjdkdjdksmdmdmdkdkdmdmdmdmsm

this novel is good and honestly it can stand alone without the harem tag. the harem tag just killed this novel for me.. pity because its quite good. coiling dragon and I shall seal the heavens were both gems and they were able to stand on their own without the harem tag but novel just killed it for me. its quite unrealistic how the girls in this novel behaves. its like they flush down their brain in a toilet or something. they all seem like animals on heat whose main purpose in life is to copulate with the mc. where the f is their self respect, common sense, pride, dignity..😒 real people dont behave that way. they're just like bunch of flowers whose only main purpose is too highlight how overpowered and chick the magnet the mc is..😩

Did you drop my guy. The story ain't bad, and I know how hard it is to write more than 700 words. But since you changed the story cover which would've costed money I'm not to sure if you dropped the book or not. A reply for confirmation would be great thanks

I have read about 800 chapters. The pace is slow. Literally everyone close to the MC cultivates way faster than he does, even though he is the one with the best of everything (Talent, Cultivation manuals, techniques etc) MC has alot of cool powers, like he has all the basic elements and thanks to his cultivation manual he is also able to control everyother element but he rarely ever uses them. Yes, he is following the path of a body cultivator, there was no need to have him control elements if was barely gonna use them. MC is cultivating too many things at the same time. Different colonies have different names for their cultivation levels so it gets quite confusing at times. Oh and the harem, for someone who his father and him were betrayed and both died cuz of it, he really easily trusts people. 😑

Fatty friend in the first chapter and so many other generic cliches used in every single Chinese novel. There is absolutely nothing special or unique about another generic trash and machine translated novel like this. Skip it.

I enjoy this novel as the magic system is different from many other ones. The character development is spot on. I do wish that the author released chapters more frequently. I like the multiple worlds developed by the author.

I'll admit, I haven't read this yet. Just reviewed this after reading the synopsis and seeing the similarities between this novel and a generic cultivation novel. You guys can check 'Unrivaled Medicine God' to confirm this.

Well written, the MC is likeable and easily relatable. There is good use of imagery and good ole face slapping. What would a cultivation novel be without face slapping. Also has harem.

Really like the story, the first ~50 chapters really had me infuriated for the main character but I stuck around because I enjoyed the premise.... And I'm glad I did!

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I request you to drop it. So any person other than you can take it and retranslate or restart the novel again. If you can't finish a work, don't start it. Are you(author) and my little brother (author of cultivation online) the same person i.e the same person with 2 ids? Because both of you suck at updating.

Trash story. A wimpy, pathetic MC, with a bunch or narcissistic, arrogant, trash females. Don't waste your time and go read something else.

this is a waste of time light novel. no essense in the story and the character at all. character interaction is so bad, one would think a conversation between two illiterate.

I only made it to c13 before I dropped it. Grammar was horrible. Lost some brain cells trying to decipher it. I'm just adding a bit more so I can post this review.

sorry, i read these and seems settings is not that quite there yet, it's like chinese novel but kinda have setting of english novel. i was hoping that this will be good in latter chapter

this book is actually good the only problem is the use of too much cliche and some anticlimatic event like for example the revelation about his origin and also you keep on piling girls around him ,i get it, i get it that you will make this into harem but there is no need to rush things maybe itll just make your mc like a cliche horney mc but i dont know maybe you are aimimg for that