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joh9wick2dCommentednot much in the sense of fighting. just raw power. what was he doing for the past year?? Best fightings are not the ones where they trade blows and beat each other. Best fights are those where they risk everything and avoid, parr, block each other until that last moment they land a blow..
Seeing that I will lose if I don't go into my angelic form, I bring my wings out and spartan kick him in the chest. This time the kick sends him flying into the wall with a crash, as he pushes himself up and spits blood from his mouth. His look is of much more surprise at how drastically my strength increased. Then he launches himself forward and is no longer holding back at me, from what I can tell. His one punch lands on my chest and it knocks the wind out of me before he follows up with a kick sending me flying back but my wings stop me from going too far. From those hits, I felt my bones bruise from that, but I push through the pain and reattack him. After an hour of us beating each other, we stop when I land on the ground from his last punch.- joh9wick3dCommented
agh... chill out bruh... stop being edgy all the time...
"Tradition is just peer pressure from dead people, it's obsolete. And if I don't let living people tell me what to do why would I ever listen to corpses." - joh9wick9dCommented
why almost? it js frightening..
Guy nodded his head with his friend's assessment. "His growth rate is unbelievable, it's almost frightening. Even for you it took years of combat and training for your chakra flow to reach anywhere near that stage." - joh9wick9dCommented
why almost? it is unachievable.
The Sharingan ninja looked up at his friend with a serious gaze and continued. "If my Sharingan wasn't playing tricks on me then I saw him balance his chakra within 0.1 percent accuracy. Something that's almost unachievable for most people even with experience and immense training…. But he managed to do it and it shows his immeasurable potential and genius talent." - joh9wick10dCommented
Man, you are dragging it too much.. too forced to think of it as a natural story development. I mean, duh, technology is the obvious developmental path the world will take. Realizing it sooner, kudos to the prince.. But glorifying it to such an extent, at the expense of a 2000 word chapter? To me, the chapter was just hollow.Its 241 chapters in, and we have yet to go to the start of the canon.. when does it end, author??
The Daimyo in this story, his children, the ministers, they are all original characters I created. So now that you know a little bit more about the 3rd prince, what are your thoughts? - joh9wick10dReplied to phrogberry
is there a series or movie on this? what series does it belong to??
[Reward: [Galio the Colossus] summoning contract.] - joh9wick10dCommented
damn where are you getting the names? be sure to pronounce it before adding such a name... and atleast provide a world map you are trying to build here
It is a city with a population of thirty-six thousand people. It is located in the west of the Bagyarosia Kingdom bordering the Bishopric of Turtevekesia. - joh9wick11dCommented
Agreed. Like its their compulsion to mention it. As if without mentioning it, the story won't get any traction.
"Is this the famous transmigration like in the web novel!!?...no, should I call it rebirth? reincarnation? restart?...Well, whatever. Who cares about the small details". - joh9wick14dCommented
how did he develop the flying thunder god out of his ass??
What makes it S-rank is the potential lethality of the technique and the complicated knowledge one has to have of the sealing technique, as well as creating the formation of a space-time network that connects to the sealing formula. Then one has to be able to execute the technique by connecting the object through either their seal or chakra to the space-time network that allows for instant teleportation. I like the design of the 4th Hokage's Flying Thunder God kunai. If we get accepted into the leaf village I'll see if there's a way to manufacture my own. For now I'll stick to inscribing my Flying Thunder God seal onto these blank paper tags that I have and attach them to regular kunai. - joh9wick14dCommented
out of all things you could have wished for, blood manipulation? although thats an op ability there are alot more powerful abilities thàn that
"I want a blood manipulation ability." - joh9wick15dCommented
you just said you will not go out of your way to make women fall in love? and you broke character like you are breaking back
But, it's like he was truly motivated to make her fall in love with him. And, it's not like he was afraid of failure but he didn't want to fail in this. - joh9wick15dCommented
a wise man said if you love two woman, choose the second one.. coz if you truly loved the first one you wouldn't fall for the second one..
Shizune shook her head with a sad expression and spoke. She didn't want Tsunade to compete and she knew that Tsunade wouldn't want to compete. - joh9wick15dCommented
Sensei*
"Captain, we are too tired." Menma replied. His body was still aching a bit. He truly wanted to take this day off. - joh9wick16dReplied to KenTheSlayer
Agreed, feels like something thrown out there just for the sake of it.. Killing intent?? really? he hasn't even taken a life yet...
At this moment, everyone was shocked by his murderous eyes even Sasuke who had murderous intent in his eyes trembled before Menma. - joh9wick16dCommented
please don't replace konoha 12 as your convenience .. form your own team... too many fanfics with that format with little to show for it
In fact, the whole Konoha 12 was here. Everyone was around the same age. And, this made Menma quite amazed. Because normally, he didn't expect to see Shikamaru, Naruto, and Choji in the class. - joh9wick16dCommented
when wjll the uchiha massacre happen?? it should have already happened right?
In that manner, another four weeks passed. It had been over 2 months since they became a Genin team. They completed eight D-Rank missions overall (AN: 7-8 D-Ranks was what the Konoha 12 had before the Chunin Exam, according to the Naruto Databook). And another day came, and the team began their morning routine like usual. After two hours of practice and spars, Inoichi gathered his three genin. - joh9wick16dCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: Bells
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he already got the six eyes... it feels redundant to want to acquire all eyes there are in existence... you could have just wished for tenseigan for that matter...
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I don't understand why she is not using wood release as her main attack aided by other elements.. feels like wood release is just for show... specially after its reveal
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