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Review Detail of Higgs in Prime Originator

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I quite like the general idea of the story. I also kinda like that the fact that the translation is not that bad. The idea of the powers is great and some twists. Now for the things I didnt like. The plot while amusing was all over the place. It was going quite well when the MC was going to school but then it was overlapped with another crisis. Right then its just one problem over the other. The story couldve gone better if each problem was introduced and solved through each arc. Seperating the School Arc, Civil War Arc, and the Invasion Arc but no. What we read in the story was just one problem after the other with no proper organization. There were so many forgotten issues just from ch 1 to 120+ some were: what happened to the deal with Lynn Cromwell and his grandfather before, during and after the invasion, What happened to the other school members and many more. Basically many details were skipped because our dear author here overlappes one crisis after another without complete thought.

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