it was going so good 😩

i’m lost on most of the important information because of bad grammar and wording.

😂😂

everybody watches anime now. It’s the “cool” thing to do 😂

this is one of the trending novels…?

such a hard read. the pacing of the paragraphs, the confusing changes in pov, the confusing story itself. Above all, the over dramatic ‘realism’ you’re trying to incorporate into your story. “how would some really act if they’d been put into someone else body?” Personally i hope i don’t act like a complete drooling, mindless idiot. I honestly don’t enjoy reading this type of jumbled “mystery” and i consider myself to be a fan of the mystery tag. This is an example of getting caught up into your own ideas and just spitting them out hoping it comes off as mysterious.

disappointed. The mc is the worst aspect of this story. The world background is great and so is the power system so far but the mc has ruined it for me.

It is a decent read but there a some problems. The mc is bland, when something happens that would excite anybody he shows no emotion. The only interesting characters are side ones who we only read about for one or two chapters and that’s it. Then we get to the part where webnovel has just become lazy and greedy. they post stories like this that are outdated in china(MTL) post it on here and make money off this without even going the extra mile to proof read and fix the mistakes. Then they shorten the time they want us to pay for chapters. They want all the money but don’t want to work for it. I’m seriously considering finding a better app for reading novels and if anybody knows some good ones and you happen to read this then give me some advice please.

looks like 4 words to me

why can’t there be a decent story without some young master or face slapping involved

It could be a good read and it does start out okay but you can start see the numerous grammar mistakes as the chapters go by. To me it seems the author had no idea where the novel was going to go, how his mc’s personality would be and how the world back ground would pan out. The only thing he knew was to make his mc be an open pervert. We get no world back ground, no information on the mc before or after transmigration. The only world background we get is the power level, and that the world evolved and that’s it. The chapters themselves are about 6-7 pages which is extremely short and a page per chapter is just for all about the system info and his “stats.” My only advice for the author would be to Prepare more. Instead of going straight into making a novel with only an idea of a story it might be better to actually write notes, brainstorm some more and actually put time into your story. It’s obvious how little thought process was involved once your mc showed up. Good luck

dropping. The story writing and grammar is not good enough to keep me interested. Good luck

wonderful weird thing to say and grammar

wonderful grammar

wonderful grammar

wonderful grammar

this is why i hate systems smh

if it’s multiple transmigrated people then i’m out

humming a song doesn’t let know how good it is. In fact i don’t even know what song someone is humming most of the time even i know the song by heart.