SomDxD
I personally really like this story! I am however interested in who Zero will end up with, although I am definitely hoping it is Mia. Mainly because I really like her character and obviously Zero has spent the most time with her albeit only for training and whatnot. It sucks that I can't read the next ten chapters and can only read up to chapter 106 right now. Overall I really like this story and hope you continue with a consistent schedule with the same or higher quality chapters maybe even special chapters that are even more words for an event or celebration.
In this work we can observe a high level of character development, realistic dialogue and an exciting plot. The author writes interestingly, but so far the detail of the world is poorly visible. This is not a significant problem, since a more detailed description could make reading boring, so it is perceived as normal. Especially considering that common features can be traced in the world and as the plot unfolds, we will learn more and more. This should be praised. Of the cons that catch your eye, you can only highlight the lack of stability in the release of chapters. Try your best Author-kun, your story is wonderful!
It takes a lot of “inspiration” from the novels extra and authors POV. The grammar is poor and the gaps are large. The conversations are forced, the building blocks of the story are missing, and the plot armor is strong. The story also suffers from multiple POV. In the first 20 chapters, the MC is not in at least 4 of the chapters. Overall, it doesn’t offer enough new perspective or situations to be worth continuing reading for me.
A fun read. with a MC with cool powers. I'm a sucker for shadow powers and ice powers so this scratches that niche for me. though despite the positive review I'm leaving it I do have a few critiques. There's a lot of spelling and grammar errors I noticed immediately when I first started reading. one that really was jarring was words like "swallow" was being spelled as Shallow. I do love the gimmicky kinda memey nature of the writing and how zero incorporates earth world culture in this novel. it's cute to see references like that and thoroughly enjoy. though sadly besides zero I really do not care about any of the side characters. well that is besides Misha. besides zero I really enjoy her growth. I love the underdog story of her and how she's catching up to Hiro. also despite the name of the story I was hoping there would be more Parallel memories. so far with only 2 which the second one kinda came out surprisingly. with the whole parallel universe theory and etc I was hoping maybe he would use these memories and abilities (which he seems to get from said memories) to change his fighting style pretty drastically. all In all it's really enjoyable. the only ongoing novel I read from chapter one to current in 2 weeks. (note I have read full web novels before to completion. but not ongoing to current.) give it a read. might have fun.
I was having a good time reading it when mc decided to follow the plot and confess to a girl and praising her daily before that even though he knows he will get rejected so just the novel plot doesn't change that's dumb really if he had a mob role so it won't affect the plot kuch if he didn't act like a love stuck fool so i dropped it because of it otherwise you guys can read it if you can go through it