Review Detail of its_L in Parallel Memory

I was having a good time reading it when mc decided to follow the plot and confess to a girl and praising her daily before that even though he knows he will get rejected so just the novel plot doesn't change that's dumb really if he had a mob role so it won't affect the plot kuch if he didn't act like a love stuck fool so i dropped it because of it otherwise you guys can read it if you can go through it