Review Detail of Coheed27 in Parallel Memory

It takes a lot of “inspiration” from the novels extra and authors POV. The grammar is poor and the gaps are large. The conversations are forced, the building blocks of the story are missing, and the plot armor is strong. The story also suffers from multiple POV. In the first 20 chapters, the MC is not in at least 4 of the chapters. Overall, it doesn’t offer enough new perspective or situations to be worth continuing reading for me.