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Thiago_32767dCommentedIn the most recent chapters with him pitching using his right, this whole thing about him learning to pitch with his left feels kinda useless now. I hope we revisit this somehow. I’d love to see him use his left hand for pitching (easier teams) or just use his left hand while playing first base that way we can still have him bat when he isn’t pitching.
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You use the word “but” way to many times
He didn't want to go out either, he was afraid to see people. - Thiago_327614dCommented
Dude has been 5 star for 2 years but can assist them to break through to 7th star that quickly…
A mischievous smile spread across my face. "And there's more," I continued. "In two weeks, I expect you both, Harvey and Amber, to reach the level of a seven-star mage. I will personally assist you in achieving this breakthrough. You are my lieutenants you can't be weak. By then, the others will have completed their tasks and join our ranks." - Thiago_327622dReplied to Loneee_3
I agree. Please just add at the end of the chapter if you decide to include these.
"Noah's different today, he's able to talk to me normally..." She said. "It's been so long since he talked to me, for a second I felt like my big brother had come back." - Thiago_327622dCommented
Dude… this is annoying. Please just fill in gaps with dialogue or internal monologue don’t use this to info dump.
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