Reviews of Our Mighty Crusaders

The story line is interesting and your characters also. You're doing great job! I liked movies like Butterfly Effect, Minority report, Inception, Back to the future, etc... and I am happy that somebody is going in the direction of changing the past... You have a great idea! I hope that you can cope with the (difficult) topic :)

Who's got a time loop when you need one? I know! This story right here! I am still to read all of it - so I added to my library but so far - oh boy! The character construction is done carefully and it is not over the top. By the 3rd chapter, you are already emotionally invested and truly happy for the time loop. Some English vocabulary polishing is needed here and there - but this author has a good sense of his story and I feel he invested time into developing it - he certainly manages to get the user immersed.

Good story so far, and the pacing and build up of the story has been nice. Hope the author continues to flesh the story out properly. Nice work.

Love the concept of the novel. The first few chapters really keep you intrigued the whole time, especially the first chapter. Really well written!

I am a fan of the slow build. It kind of grabs your attention, because it slowly reveals the plot. Gives off a “Happy Death Day” vibe that I really like, and the first chapter does all the cool foreshadowing. I like it. It is different and attention-grabbing, and the MC makes just enough stupid decisions to create the necessary tension.

The flow at the first chapter is good. The characters are likeable. I won't point out the minor grammatical errors since it is unnecessary. I wish this book a good luck! Cool book cover by the way.

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Top quality story here. Got a real sense of Groundhog Day. Always an interesting concept. The mystery surrounding the bombing is also an excellent hook for for the reader. I look forward to reading this as a complete work. Great stuff so far, and I really see it building up to something spectacular.

Really interesting concept! Also I love the peaceful beginning, and the suspenseful setting that comes after hehe. The author did a great job in painting the atmosphere as well and I love how the author portrayed the character's interaction too, looking forward for more, author! <3

Well, the concept is kinda new to me. I'm intrigued, man. Here's wishing to read for more! But if it's possible, space some paragraphs eh? Sorry for my defective eyes, it can't read many small letters cramp in one paragraph. But it's good. The concept got me hook. Looking forward to how it will come out. Great job author!

The story was nice and smooth to read. Its story was captivating and heart racking that made me focus on what is happening. The only problem I can point out was to make your narration to become paragraphs. That way, it will not be cut halfway. You can check the first chapter yourself and see that it was forcefully cut. But all in all, It was a heartwarming story. Endearing and splendid.

Hey! I love the story so far, its really heartwarming right from its prologue, PRO TIP- DESIGN A NEW COVER! it'll help reach out to readers, truly underrated, ill be taking notes because the writing is brutally nice Now

The writing quality is excellent though, some paragraphs are long but it's a matter of preference so, no problem with it. The start of the story is quiet enjoyable. Though, I sometimes read romance but I'm looking forward to future arcs.

Hi guys, sorry for the BIG delay in updating chapters, my device got stolen and I'm just managing in school, will continue updating once things get sorted. Peace!!

The premise of the plot really intrigues me and the description of it really encapsulates what you're trying to portray and the pacing could be a problem but to me it's fine.

The story has an interesting twist to get the reader hooked in the initial chapters itself. The mystery and foreshadowing adds spice. Only, a few grammar checks and the story is good to go.

The plot is sure interesting, the writing style is detailed, you managed to let the reader's curiosity hang in the air with the mystery. The description of the incident, was 10/10, was really heartbroken. Only a few grammar errors but can be easily fixed. The plot is a gem, so keep improving and it will surely be better than what it already is.

The first chapter reminded me of all the great moments l had as a kid at my grandparents house and all thr folklores they told me. And that's one of the reasons why l like this book. It produces feelings of warmth and family. Top tier content. I am not one who usually likes reading stories from third person perspective but the say you write captivates the readers attention. And the flow(smooth) , there aren't jumps in the time line, do thank you for that. Keep up the good work

Oh , I love the story until now . I love the mystery that the author maintains! Good work here . All the best .[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Good start. First chapter itself was too good! I was hooked! and that stir was also very interesting. It was as if I was present at the scene and listening to that story. Anyway, your story is going good. Keep updating!