The vivid imagery is heavy in this story, I love it. If I could get give more stars for writing quality I totally would. Also research into scientific theories is really evident. The author definitely puts a lot into this story and I look forward to reading more!

Love the concept of the novel. The first few chapters really keep you intrigued the whole time, especially the first chapter. Really well written!

I appreciate it! I will definitely try to find/create a book cover soon!

Thanks you much!

You're definitely right, I need to proofread more and edit already existing chapters. Thanks so much for the feedback!

Thanks so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it

Thanks so much for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Mr. Robot, you are very lucky I'm barely on the border of having a star rating, if it weren't for that I would banish you from this realm. Your time is limited here...

The writing style of the author really sucks you into the story. The use of emoticons is really unique and adds a whole extra layer of emotion and humor to the story. The characters are well written, the story is creative as well. Overall, I've loved what I've read so far. Well done!

The beginning of this story really sucks you in, it sets up for a lot of different paths for the story to take. Love Luna as a character, the world building is very detailed and the main concepts are really interesting. Overall, great read!

The thing I love most about this book is the word choice of the author. It's inspiring both as an author and as a reader, the chapters are riddled with amazing uses of metaphors and vivid imagery. The characters are well written, Jake is surprisingly funny. The world building is just enough information to keep you fed yet still curious for more. The only thing I would change is the pacing, it's a bit too quick and I would prefer to have more time to indulge in the characters and the events. But it really doesn't take away too much from the novel, a great read!!

Really like this passage, lots of detail so seamlessly put into it! Also the prospect of "world-building" is a super cool idea.

Hahaha, yes I think everyone needs one now a days

The idea for the novel is really interesting. Love that dialogue between characters and the world description is good as well. The character relationships are really entertaining, the only small thing I have a gripe with is the grammar. The grammar does get better as the novel progresses however, which is great! Overall, an great read imo.

The first thing I took a liking to was the dialogue, it's pretty well written and has charm to it. The pacing is a bit fast for just the 1st chapter and their are some minor grammar mistakes but nothing major. Overall the beginning is really good and enjoyable. It makes you wanna see what happens next. Good luck with your writing journey!

Thank you for the kind words good sir

It is I, the author! I write this novel, I personally think it is pretty rad (hence the perfect 5 star review). I work hard on it and I appreciate everyone who reads it. Thanks for even reading this because that means you clicked on a link or just clicked on my story and for doing that you are a very cool person. Thanks everyone for reading!!