The plot is sure interesting, the writing style is detailed, you managed to let the reader's curiosity hang in the air with the mystery. The description of the incident, was 10/10, was really heartbroken. Only a few grammar errors but can be easily fixed. The plot is a gem, so keep improving and it will surely be better than what it already is.
DonDenis
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