Who's got a time loop when you need one? I know! This story right here! I am still to read all of it - so I added to my library but so far - oh boy! The character construction is done carefully and it is not over the top. By the 3rd chapter, you are already emotionally invested and truly happy for the time loop. Some English vocabulary polishing is needed here and there - but this author has a good sense of his story and I feel he invested time into developing it - he certainly manages to get the user immersed.
DonDenis
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