Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Our Mighty Crusaders
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The story was nice and smooth to read. Its story was captivating and heart racking that made me focus on what is happening. The only problem I can point out was to make your narration to become paragraphs. That way, it will not be cut halfway. You can check the first chapter yourself and see that it was forcefully cut. But all in all, It was a heartwarming story. Endearing and splendid.
Our Mighty Crusaders
DonDenis
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What I mean was to paragraph the story...it has hundreds of words on one paragraph each.....Kindly look the chapter one and it was very long on one paragraph ..making the system to forcefully cut it and the word that was cut became a typo.
DonDenis:Thanks for the review đ§Ą, but I really don't get the part of the narration that was cut, only the story their grandpa was telling, which their mother actually cut in the story, perhaps it was what you mistook as my narration?
DonDenis:Thanks for the review đ§Ą, but I really don't get the part of the narration that was cut, only the story their grandpa was telling, which their mother actually cut in the story, perhaps it was what you mistook as my narration?
Oh, truth is I was still new to webnovel then, and was used to writing long paragraphs, and also wanted to make the first chapter as descriptive and concise as possible, but as I entered the dialogue phase, the paragraphs shortened. Truth is, if I still find myself having to describe complex points, the paragraphs will still be as long. I guess it's just how I prefer to write it express those parts. Thanks for that. And if you notice any typos, please paragraph comment it. Thanks again.
You are welcome! It was up to you if you will adhere to my advice but ey, you are still the author! You can do what you want with your story. You know what's best for your novel. Good luck and best wishes for your novel's success!
DonDenis:Oh, truth is I was still new to webnovel then, and was used to writing long paragraphs, and also wanted to make the first chapter as descriptive and concise as possible, but as I entered the dialogue phase, the paragraphs shortened. Truth is, if I still find myself having to describe complex points, the paragraphs will still be as long. I guess it's just how I prefer to write it express those parts. Thanks for that. And if you notice any typos, please paragraph comment it. Thanks again.
Mel_Aniv:You are welcome! It was up to you if you will adhere to my advice but ey, you are still the author! You can do what you want with your story. You know what's best for your novel. Good luck and best wishes for your novel's success!