Reviews of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

the mc is a selfish, calculating villain, ready to use his own mother as an ingredient in an experiment if it will be of benefit to him. And I love it.

Thank you author for your beautiful novel And please keep up the good work 🙏👍🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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This novel sucks . What on Earth man. How can people justify such a sick person. This story is for criminals and people who are constanly on watchlists

This book is honestly one of the best Naruto fan fics I've ever read and my personal favourite when it comes to Naruto fan fics. I really love the mc's originality and the fact that he's not some hero or girl crazed guy(living life like some gotta catch em all game). So if you're looking for a logical/cold mc this is the book for you. Don't do reviews often but I really love this fanfic

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Great potencial, dosent skip or rust the story and put his special touch, a novel wit great potencial.I just hope that thw autor does not drop it.

Do not read this book at chapter 91 the MC at the age of 12 r*pes thunade. This is discusting so do be warned.

This is a sociopaths wet dream. Similar to Reverend Insanity, Mc doesn't care about anybody, calculating and manipulative as can be, with his only real goal being power. though towards the very end he does show he cares the tiniest bit about his 4 kids. So thats a bit of nice closure.

If you can't read sociopath like, villain and manipulative MC, this novel is not for you

It was a good novel but 8 year old MC started hitting on his sensei Tsunade 23 year old. I thought it was supposed to be humor but author told us he is gonna realistically develop their realtionship. Yea, that killed it for me. Imo there should be warning tags for these kind of things.

All 5 stars, Holy Shit this author is amazing. The beginning chapters may be a bit dodgy but after like chapter 20 holy hell, if manipulative and dark characters are your thing then Yami is for you! He’s what in my opinion should be an ideal ninja, maybe a bit more morals and less power hungry but who cares. Yami has amazing development and you see his growth as a human, a person and as a ninja. From frankly at best Jounin natural potential to his ascension to Godhood. World building is mindblowing and explain everything perfectly. I enjoyed this story and willing to say its most likely either my first or second favourite fanfic. HolyJoker has my respect!

If the world ever invents cloning or a real mind control device, I will use them on you so that I can read more of your amazing stories. I hate stories where the mc reincarnates and decides to babysit children or 'fix canon'. The fact that Yami is actually ambitious instead of a fanboy bootlicker just increases the appeal of the story

I love that this story was all about the mc which is my boy Yami being reincarnated in the inuzuka clan because in the anime and in the manga,that clan didn't get any love or justice that it deserved,so to the very end,I love this amazing story.

Compared to other fanfics with dark MC , this story has a more reasonanle storyline. The story mosly focuses on the increase in power levels of the cbaracter. Even with some occasional grammatical mistakes , the story was quite enjoyable.

AWESOME STORY JOKER, Very interesting mc that makes his decisions on realism and logic, uses his advantage of future knowledge to get more benefits. True to the naruto world, a brutal world where the weak fodder ninja dies so he makes plans to survive that as any other logical person should do. Naruto world is true to itself, you literally can't differentiate between this and original, as the characters are true to themselves and they're personalities. This is a breath of fresh air compared to other stories here who are boring, have bs nerfed characters, forced plot or plot armor, there is nothing of that here. Keep it going to your other stories as well[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

Holly Joker getting gang banged, that was amazing!!!!! btw needs more updates but that aside it's a 5.1/5

Aww MAn I dont even knw how genius u are jst awsm In all the story i read this story deserve 5 star <-_-> In all the novels i read it closely resembles REverned Insanity MC character I jst luv it ALso another request is to not finish it after he overcome Naruto world ( i mean dont finsh after he takes care of Kaguya ) continue it in nxt world like ONe Piece/Fairy Tale/ATG ..bla bla bla etc. thx STAY SAFE Frm COVID <-_->

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Great fan fic with a cunning and manipulative MC who is ruled by logic. The MC is smart and doesn't have any OP otherworldly or ridiculous anime powers that are not part of the naruto world. His only main cheat is the knowledge of the manga/anime and that he is hardworking and has good comprehension abilities. He is cautious and plans things ahead of time which I greatly appreciate 😊 Ignore any reviews that moan about his character as this novel never pretended to have a righteous goody two shoes MC so it is the equivalent of going to give Reverend Insanity or Warlock of the Magus World a negative 1 star review because the MC's are evil and calculative! There are thousands of stories with righteous MC's who are hot blooded and rush headfirst into every confrontation with only their plot armor to protect their dumb asses so go read those if you are so inclined and stop shitting on other novels that have a different type of MC. Personally I like a large mix of genres and different MC personalities but I must admit I understand why so many authors drop works here since I sometimes see some utter garbage that is popular due to a fast release rate and barely any critism (perhaps when you spit out 2-3 chapters a day the trolls can't even keep up 😝) and then see a well written story dumped on because the author actually replies to posts and comments... 😅 Anyway rant over 😉 Keep up the good work author and I look forward to many more chapters 👍 As for the MC's cold hearted approach I am with you all the way so long as he doesn't just start doing evil shit for no other reason than to be a d*ck! Like Fang Yuan from reverend insanity who is one of the most eviliest sons of bitches I have ever read about but I can still keep reading and enjoying because everything he does is for a reason or has a certain logic. Basically Lawful Evil=👍😈 Chaotic Evil=🤮🙄