Review Detail of Pyoug in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Completly amazing fanfic. Yami is completly ruthless and will anything to get what he wants. The Author evolves and he learns grammar TAGS: Op Mc,Ruthless,Impregnation,Cold,Smart,Calculative,Paranoid,(etc) Pretty much a very great story and as you go on you see Yami tricking, dominating, and fucks(literally ;>) people. He gets to a point where his presence is simply overbearing and respected unlike a old rètarded man(3rd hokage) 10/10 recommanded if ur into cold-blooded mc's.