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Miami_XM8dPostedThis is hot garbage, terrible grammar aside, character development is shit, Mc can be compared to a bag of rocks in terms of character and the bag of rocks would come out looking even better. Mc has a system and everything is handed to him with ease, to the point he's already kicking Kaidos ass. No challenge, no development. Just 0 to 100. Then there's the grooming. First time reading Mcs PoV and he's making out with Yamato, his sister and she's 5 at the time. literally like the first sentence from his PoV. Then he starts feeling up her thighs and she's goddamn moaning. At 5. With her 'Juices' on him by the end of it. Some serious degenerate shit. If you've read the synopsis and come for Mc x Yamato, this is not one you'd enjoy at all, Yamato may as well be Mcs doll. Wish Fulfillment to the extreme.
- Miami_XM16dCommented
Why does this feel like basic garbage dialogue of some translated wuxia/xianxia novel?
"Why are you being so selfish? You will be alive if the barrier goes down, and we will let you go. Until then, you will feed so many, so just come quietly." - Miami_XM23dCommentedYachiru had flung him over her shoulders and made her way back to the Eleventh with a speechless Junpei frantically begging to be let go.
- Miami_XM28dCommented
So he's got an inner monologue running?
"I looked at him, and he revealed himself. It was Morgan Freeman. Stars and galaxies surrounded me, and even though I wasn't sure what the fifth dimension was, I felt as if I was in it." - Miami_XM28dCommented
Reminds me of 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'. Every book began in a similar way
If you're reading this because you think you might be one of those who dream of magically appearing into a fantasy world, my advice is..remove this from your library and close the app right now. Try to lead a normal life, read some Smut theme books and jerk off by yourself to kingdom cum. Being a transmigrator is dangerous. It's scary. Most of the time, it gets you killed in painful nasty ways.. err sorry.. I think I got the wrong book. Sorry Mr.Rick, couldn't help it cause that book was one of my favorite. Ahem let's rewind the opening shall we? Else I might receive a legal letter out of nowhere. Not that it matters anymore cause..uhh well you will know soon enough. - Miami_XM1mthReplied to BeegBeegYochi
Truly, not ugly. just a few additions is all...
Personally, I don't like the original look of sukuna at all, so I turned it into the possessed version of itadori. It was time for the personalization phase. - Miami_XM1mthCommented
I wonder if she can tell something is trying to summon her.. I can't wait til they meet, and now Harry can read a person on a deeper level, hopefully his mum actually cares.
Having decided on who to summon, he took out the stone from the wand and turned it three times, thinking of Lily Potter. Yet, he was only met with a silent room. Harry's eyes grew wider and his skin grew paler with every second a shade didn't materialize itself. - Miami_XM1mthCommented
Why the change is dialogue format?
Max :"I believe you, Ben. And you say that this boy was inside of the pod too?" - Miami_XM1mthCommentedCh -2 Predators' Images
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Right now it's rather lame, however it can be taken to the extreme and it would be busted. How? If you've read the Legendary Mechanic, there's an Esper with Carbon Manipulation as his ability, and as you can guess, he's busted. Just turns swaths of people into dust like it's nothing. Even if Mc can take it to the extreme like that Esper was able to, if he focuses on it, it'd be crazy strong. Unfortunately Mc is rather frivolous/indecisive in behavior and we don't get much of an explanation for his abilities other than he did it and figured it out making it much less satisfying of a read in comparison to some of the more technical HP fanfics that delve into the magics.
Yep, I am keeping this glove on me at all times as well as a water bottle in my pocket. If anyone tries to mess with me, say a stray devil I can just pull the water bottle from my pocket, convert the insides into freezing mist and chuck that bastard and watch them get frozen while I nail a mana arrow into their forehead. - Miami_XM1mthCommented
If you combine Alkahestry and Transmutation do you get a bootleg biomancy?
Transmutation = Manipulation of materials - Miami_XM1mthCommented
Citadel doesn't acknowledge anything magical tho?
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For Planetos it may be a bit different considering the constantly shifting durations of seasons.
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'said inside his head' is thought.
'Jiran is a genius.' Tenzin said inside his head after witnessing the latter weave through the contraption with ease as if he was just taking a walk in the park. - Miami_XM1mthPosted
Alright lads, for this one you must have your brain turned off. If not your brain will melt away in frustration at the nonsense you will read here. Not recommended even if you like ATLA /Korra fics because this one doesn't give a flying fuck about any lore or background knowledge, they'll make that kinda shit up as they go.
- Miami_XM1mthReplied to MrBlackWing
No, it's a pretty good translation, hence the ?. Just a few words here and there that feel out of place.
'How the hell is this physically possible?? There is no energy or matter conversion, nor even any kind of correlation between the expansion of material and the extreme physical wear of contraction.' Noah rolled his eyes and tried to forget that this world did not obey very concrete laws, 'And there is still the courage to say that he can only use imagination after awakening. What madness.' - Miami_XM1mthCommented
So he goes Super Saiyan when he summons the sword, but without it he's incompetent asf? Pretty lame
The user is completely powerless and his monstrous Aura is sealed until he brings out "Excalibur The Sword Of Promised Victory". - Miami_XM1mthCommented
So his semblance will be trash according to the system? Even with dragon influence on it?
[Now for Abilities! Your bread and butter! You have Nasuverse Knowledge, so I will refrain from explaining what both of you're Main Abilities can do! Bluntly speaking, you will have only them for the remainder of you're life in terms of combat. Any other ability you get will pale in comparison or will be simply miscellaneous in the grand scheme of things and in comparison to both these Titans! You may get new abilities from Gacha and or set rewards from both Sub and Main Quests!] - Miami_XM1mthCommented
Tbh his Abilities are rather Op. Especially since he's not a servant and is the real, unrestricted deal. Can spam Excalibur with the regen a Dragon Core provides. Heals hella fast, he just needs to improve his combat skills and he's pretty much untouchable..
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