Reviews of My throne

The first chapter is really lets just i skim trhought the mid since its bland to much infodumping of each character that is introduced. since this a first WIP it could work with the gramar a little bit. The dialogue is really unique without the quotation mark that is use most of novels i have read. Characters first and foremost a still have no clue which time period is this storu take place no explination what's over at the 1st chapter. coz the characters are kinda acting like elementary students, however if i knew which time period was this thay would give me context for why they are acting in such a way. overall i give this rate a 3/5 since its still all brand-new hopefully this review help you in anyway. so keep writing author [img=recommend]

I enjoyed the first chapter, the fact that a girl wanted to participate in a competition among boys made me want to find out how she would do it. Brilliant plot author... thumbs up

This is a wonderful novel, well built and beautifully written 😃 Well done author, nice work. Do publish more chapters. And also, Good luck.

I really like Ryoko's strong girl power. She is ready for challenges and also the way she decided to take on the challenge regardless of being a girl. Keep up the good job.

great story and i like MC and genres like this. nice writing style but need little improvement about punctuation, the paragraph long, and the number of words per chapter is also comfortable to read,

Grammar and writing style is readable so that's a good sign. too few chapters to comment on world building but it's looking good so far. updating could be better but that's fine and character description is top notch. Keep it up author ✨

Your story is unique , like i loved the plot and especially its synopsis but there are no more chapters so hope you continue updating and writing more and best of luck💕💕

I really like this because it's a new concept and I like strong female leads I find your story really interesting and hope you keep up the good work 😉

This book is amazing it immediately sucks you into the world, and you begin to see the world through ryokos eyes, I'm surprised it hasn't hit 20k views yet, its almost read.

A really nice plot that the author has crafted over here. It's something new that I would definitely love to read in my free time. Good work author!

Really a great piece of work. It's a rare type since female MCs are hard to come by. Love ryoko's attitude tho 😂 Nice concept, Highly recommend this book

Interesting story ... that vibe gave me goosebumps .. love your work author and waiting for more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The story is very well written, and the MC is a strong willed girl who knows what she wants. She doesn't care what others think of her and knows she will turn over every obstacle. I think the author did an amazing job with this sstory and I'm excited to see how it turns out!

The world setting in the story is great. I liked the plot of the story very much. The characters too were quite interesting. I am looking forward to read more chapters.

Amazing work with nice chapters, great pacing, and world building. I look forward to reading more from this Author, and would recommend this to anyone into the genre 👍📖

Great job in coming up with this author! I believe you can make it in this app. But there is only one teeny tiny tweak in the story. The dialogue tags and the quotation mark. Some readers like to know who is speaking, and the actions the character performs while speaking which makes it more real for them. All the way, novel's been great, didn't see much mistakes except for some spellings. Welcome to the world of authors!💯💖

Good book, the writing style is original, there are some punctuation, typos, and grammar issue but nothing too glaring. The characters are well painted, though there may be a lot of them at the start of the novel to my taste; I prefer to familiarize myself with a handful of characters first.

I hadn't really tried reading this genre in the past. So I was doubtful at first but as soon as I read the synopsis I found out how wrong my doubts were. The plot is so great, it literally is captivating. The characters too are interesting. The small mistakes here and there grammatically can be easily overlooked. I am really looking forward for the coming chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

This book is great... It gets more interesting and fun to read at the end of every chapter. Every chapter I finish reading makes me want to read the next... Thumbs up to the author, you deserve it!.

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