Reviews of My Multiverse Trip

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So much chapter..... But a weak spicy Chicken MC......... Naive beta MC........ Just Fucking with your slow pace and slow growth Fucking MC..... Go die you weak beta MC

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Looks really good I hope that there will be updates a lot and you work on your other stories. And among other things that needs to be done and I hope you remain healthy and well

Penulisan yang buruk, tidak memperhatikan paragraf dan huruf kapital dalam penulisan yang membuatnya berantakan. Membaca ini membuatku sakit mata karena hal ini, dan juga Protagonisnya tidak layak karena terlalu banyak perencanaan tetapi hal-hal tersebut hanya berupa teks saja. Total Skor 2.4

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We can see from the two newest review about the problems that this novel have,so i think it's okay for me not to say it again to you. But sadly their (the two newest reviewer) it's just stupid prick !! I bet they just read a short couples of chapter not even over 97 chapters at all,and they're talking like they know everything,a cocky prick. Due with a respect the problems do really exists, but the story just getting better and better to the lastest chapter 185th. When you read a new book with new concept and idea of different people, I hope you maintain a basic etiquette, respect the idea of the author and their's style and maintain the open minded mentality. Why u must keep the proper etiquette?? It's reflected your bearing, personality,and your level of education,and not make people think you're a arrogant prick, that even didn't trying to write/type their own novel,lame. Summary for the novel, although with all the problems that appear in the story, but it getting better over the time, don't worry the story is enjoyable enough to pass your time. Don't be too hard, there's nothing like a perfect novel it's just the problem of your taste,if it's not to your liking read other novel dude. Great work and Good luck Author, I'm waiting for more of your chapters~

Yeet shameless author review sadly my first 20 or so chapters I need to go back and redo if you make it past that everything is golden boys.

Unreadable, and the bits you can read are absolute trash. Not a single thing makes sense, nothing is coherent, or even remotly interesting.

It's quite hard to read, barely any commas and capitalization, and lots of block of text. Even if this is written on phone, I don't see how this prevent putting commas or separating paragraphs.

The author talks more than Hermione! You don't know what scores mean! There are no commas, full stops or paragraphs in the first chapters. He asks Rob for powers, which NEVER work! Most of the story is the speaker (author) narrating... There are no decent interactions with the main characters. He NEVER made it clear if he revealed his identity to his parents in HP, but he told God and the world, "And everyone accepted it perfectly fine", that doesn't make sense! The MC steals things for the sake of stealing, but he is ALWAYS poor! But out of nowhere he buys expensive things from the system. He has no connection!!!! The author keeps breaking the 4th wall! Then he decides to go to the Twilight Universe and completely changes the MC's personality and transforms him into Bella, ipsis litteris, making a defenseless princess who keeps being saved from danger like an idiot! But how can someone who took down Voldemort, with his eyes closed, be so pathetic, when he's still been trained for months by Scáthach??? Yes!!! The author summoned Scáthach to train the stupid MC and he continues with his Bella identity crisis, being saved as a helpless little princess!!!! For those who have read this far, if you want to read it because you have nothing to read, like me, I'm sure you're going to be very angry! Because the story is done amateurishly, looking more like a chunni diary than a fanfic. CONGRATULATIONS author for this gooseberry!

As a die-hard fan of the Harry Potter saga, I was eagerly anticipating diving into the magical universe. Unfortunately, I can't find a single redeeming quality in this novel. From the uninspired plot to the shallow characterization of the characters, this work falls flat in every aspect.

so hard to read. author doesn't use commas, quotations, and periods. the paragraphs are too long too.

Too many perks and custom made things. Waste of time, it's name should be a god of the Harry Potter world with that many advantages. It has touch of Chinese novel, now you can get it from this it too cranky.

It was fine up until about chapter 100 then upon jumping to a new world the MC developed a split personality disorder and started acting completely out of character.