Review Detail of HaremIsLifeDAO in My Multiverse Trip

The author talks more than Hermione! You don't know what scores mean! There are no commas, full stops or paragraphs in the first chapters. He asks Rob for powers, which NEVER work! Most of the story is the speaker (author) narrating... There are no decent interactions with the main characters. He NEVER made it clear if he revealed his identity to his parents in HP, but he told God and the world, "And everyone accepted it perfectly fine", that doesn't make sense! The MC steals things for the sake of stealing, but he is ALWAYS poor! But out of nowhere he buys expensive things from the system. He has no connection!!!! The author keeps breaking the 4th wall! Then he decides to go to the Twilight Universe and completely changes the MC's personality and transforms him into Bella, ipsis litteris, making a defenseless princess who keeps being saved from danger like an idiot! But how can someone who took down Voldemort, with his eyes closed, be so pathetic, when he's still been trained for months by Scáthach??? Yes!!! The author summoned Scáthach to train the stupid MC and he continues with his Bella identity crisis, being saved as a helpless little princess!!!! For those who have read this far, if you want to read it because you have nothing to read, like me, I'm sure you're going to be very angry! Because the story is done amateurishly, looking more like a chunni diary than a fanfic. CONGRATULATIONS author for this gooseberry!