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Rest In Peace Author . The story itself per chapter is too short , and it stopped more than a year just up to 15 chapter , it's even not yet reached Fate Zero , so disappointing . Although the premise is interesting .
doesn't matter , be open minded bro , it's just have harem tag , the start of the story till the latest didn't have many harem elements , it's still quite good in terms of story and it format structure , other Oshi No Ko Fanfiction , still not good enough , and the number is still too small
honestly I'm not yet thinking about it , but don't worries while you wait for the update of this book you can binge read this one book i like : That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol by RazackCh it's contain the elements of crossover with " Kaguya sama love is war " , good luck
learn from other people fanfiction , search one with at least readable grammar and fewer mistake . for starter you can copy their writing format and change the content with your own story , after you have a good enough experience and can do it by your own , you can try other variety of format based on what you already learned .
question it is fastest or faster ?
the premise and wishes are interesting , but bro the chapter is too short , like it's better for fewer chapter with more word count rather like now , more than one chapter and he is still in the same place and discussing the same thing , just advice , not a hate comment .
don't worries bro this is for the perfect conclusion for the season 1 aka Childhood Arc , Season 2 aka Teenage Phase will focus around Aqua journey in the entertainment world , so stay tuned . Btw i like Cat , but this one I don't like it , it face line look particularly annoying , lol have a great day , God bless .
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yes but please use italics and bold when you type the word " SOME" ., lol bro
yeah like "little naughty " lol
yeah it's mean to become a lazy person , you know salt fish in the market ? that thing can only either lay to the right side or to the left side , and either way it wouldn't change anything , it would always be just a salt fish , hence this phrase mean when it used to describe someone .
in simple word , protagonist can be changed to anyone , but su yuntao is a must meet person to make you extraordinary person .
maybe it's mean that no matter who will be the protagonist , he will always need to meet su yuntao , because he is the key person to make all this "protagonist" become extraordinary person from simple ordinary person he is used to be , aka awaken their martial spirit .
bro you need to really understand what you're talking about before you mislead others . Here's wiki The ICD criteria also refrain from specifying chronological ages.[5] In popular usage, the word pedophilia is often applied to any sexual interest in children or the act of child sexual abuse, including any sexual interest in minors below the local age of consent or age of adulthood, regardless of their level of physical or mental development.[1][2]: vii [6] This use conflates the sexual attraction to prepubescent children with the act of child sexual abuse and fails to distinguish between attraction to prepubescent and pubescent or post-pubescent minors.[7][8] Such use should be avoided, because although some people who commit child sexual abuse are pedophiles,[6][9] child sexual abuse offenders are not pedophiles unless they have a primary or exclusive sexual interest in prepubescent children,[7][10][11] and many pedophiles do not molest children.[12] This story is not about old man Goro attracted to minors age Hoshino Ruby , it's about a girl named Sarina tendoji who died of cancer , then reincarnated as Hoshino Ruby , and she is still in love with her first love from her past life memory , and she will pursue her love Dr. Goro now that's she has a healthy body . it's must be distinguished between who is active and who is passive , the meaning will be different . and in the end this is just a fanfiction of an Anime and manga of Oshi No Ko , it's just a mean of entertainment . Enjoy it Guys and Gals ~
This is Author . So expect some shamelessness . Writing will be good , but maybe a little here and there will be some error in grammar , please mention it in chapter comment if you see one , so we can learn it together . Update will be done , at least 1 chapter every 2 day , I'll do more at least 3 chapter if the data is good , or you fueled me with power stone lol . the rest ? as long as there is Ai all is good , let's strive to save Ai and live comfortably as Aqua , let's give Aqua our power stone so he can increase his basic attribute data , lol