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Darius_Chromwell

Darius_Chromwell

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A simple hermit. Idk who keeps logging into my account and using up all of my spirit stones, but if your going to do that could you at least invite some people to level up the account. thanks!

2018-07-08 JoinedUnited States
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell22d
    Posted

    There’s no character development The story somewhat feels like a journal in the sense that there is almost no emotion involved in anything that happens.

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    Reincarnated in Super Gene World
    Anime & Comics · Hell_Dragon_Azavok
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell1mth
    Posted

    Started out great but once you reach 60 to 80 chapters in it turns into the (next episode of dragon ball z) meaning the next 60 chapters are all one fight. It’s just filler and it’s boring filler at that.

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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell1mth
    Commented

    4th wall? What 4th wall, is it tasty?

    Ch 120 Ch-120 Ashura vs Jiryoku begin!
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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell1mth
    Posted

    This isn’t even a Fanfic it’s just an advertisement for the author’s Patreon.

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    DxD: Meta Essence Gacha
    Anime & Comics · HentaiGodZ
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell1mth
    Posted

    Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!

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    My Hero Academia: World Fishing Quirk
    Anime & Comics · LukasS
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell1mth
    Posted

    Honestly the story started out fine. I like the villain with a plot changing system type of story, but there are so many plot holes and inconsistencies especially in the later chapters I had to give up on reading it before making it to chapter 50. I think it’s a great first draft for a story but the author should probably use it as just that. I would love to see it rewritten and have those plot holes filled.

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    DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex
    Anime & Comics · Mirko22
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell1mth
    Posted

    Uhg I feel sick trying to read this, the spacing is all wrong. I think this might be the first time I’ve ever gotten motion sickness from reading a novel.

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    I joined Chat Group, After Becoming NPC
    Anime & Comics · LaziestMan
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell2mth
    Posted

    I’m all for a multiversal shop type system but I think the author may have picked the wrong target audience to pair with it not to mention the Chinese idioms that really don’t translate well over to English.

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    Dimensional Tavern In Sabaody Archipelago [OnePiece Fanfic]
    Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell2mth
    Posted

    The story is decent up until they introduce the fact that there are multiple reincarnated characters all who have fragments of the MC’s system. That in itself doesn’t ruin the story but it’s more the fact that almost all of the rest of the story is written in the perspective of those other reincarnated characters, after reading around 200 chapters I don’t think the author even remembers who the MC is anymore.

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    Magic Deity: Godly Choices
    Fantasy · Hundred Thousand Feet of Red Dust
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell2mth
    Posted

    The story is just a excuse for the author to vent their necrophilia desires, the entire first world is just him describing how much he wants to have sex with a corpse. The system is fine but the author’s preferences made me want to puke within the first 20ish chapters.

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    World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society
    Fantasy · ShadowKatake
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell2mth
    Posted

    I like the idea of a gatcha power but the fact that it’s a common ability in the world is a disappointment even if his is better. I very much like the world background I’m a huge fan of novels like infinite mana in the apocalypse so a system world with awakeners and randomly appearing dungeons is very appealing. What I absolutely hate is the MC he’s a complete pushover and that alone makes it almost unreadable for me not to mention the fact that he comes with all of his gatcha summons pre-unlocked which completely makes the gatcha aspect pointless it would be better to just call him a summoner.

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    Gacha No Life (Fan-Fic)
    Anime & Comics · PuckZCat
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Posted

    Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy. Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.

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    DxD: Random Reward System
    Anime & Comics · Dr_Frauds
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Posted

    It’s just a copy of a novel on FanFiction.Net, I think it’s called Percy Jackson and the Game. I don’t care if you post it on here but you should at least give credit to the author of the fanfic.

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    Percy Jackson and the Gaia System
    Movies · UchihaFamily
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Posted

    MC goes on and on about not being a simp for the first 5 chapters but then folds like a paper fan in chapter 7 becoming a simp after a single setback. It’s unfortunate because I was looking forward to a new danmachi fanfic but I can already see where this is going so I’m gonna dip here.

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    已删除的故事
    Book&Literature · Rtanj
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Commented

    Welp it’s unfortunately time to drop this novel oh well it didn’t have much promise anyways…

    Ch 6 Acceptance
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    已删除的故事
    Book&Literature · Rtanj
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Posted

    If you can get past the weird use of [] instead of “” it’s a fairly good fanfic up until around chapter sixty after which you start seeing the normal problems that quickly ruin a good story such as huge nerfs to the MC or extremely cheap and forced romance that takes less than a chapter to develop into undying love.

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    Traveling in the anime multiverse with a system
    Anime & Comics · Gear5writer
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Commented

    It was going so good then you just had to nerf him and now there’s extremely cheap romance 🤮🤮🤮🤮

    Ch 73 Chapter 73 - Meeting back with Shanks
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    Traveling in the anime multiverse with a system
    Anime & Comics · Gear5writer
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Posted

    Honestly I like the idea of how the mc’s power works but it could have been implemented better in a different situation. Also I absolutely hate when a MC has the perception of a brick completely unaware of what is happening around them.

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    Mangaka in the StrawHats
    Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell3mth
    Commented

    Your name’s Lou kei and his name is Lou kei… screw it everyone’s name is now Lou kei.

    Ch 137 Chapter 137
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    Sailing with Whitebeard: Starting with a Question
    Anime & Comics · young_sunlight
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  • Darius_Chromwell
    Darius_Chromwell4mth
    Posted

    Ah yes, I had to drop this after 5 chapters just because of the rampant Selfcest. The Su Yu on Su Yu action was too much for my poor innocent eyes.

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    A farm that breeds gods and demons
    Sci-fi · Black Eyed King
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