Great novel! I sincerely hope that this gets picked.

Too many in between chapters to the point that it feels more like a questionnaire than a story

Feels too much like Dragonball in all the wrong ways, the short chapters that get nowhere and the cliffhanger at the end of every chapter. It got old fast.

At first I was like yay an actually good novel with an ability like the pocket hunting dimension, but alas it’s just another run of the mill smut novel in the making…

I’m not one for big romance sort of fanfics but this one has the potential to be good, it’s just that the translation is way too rough.

Why is this in the paid novels section this is clearly a Pokémon FanFiction and don’t tell me it isn’t because there’s only forty chapters on here and they all involve Pokémon.

Can someone please translate this to readable English, I like simulation systems but I can’t read this without getting a headache.

It feels way too forced and that could be due to translation.

There are some novels that flow like water and every line of dialogue is a stroke of genius….. This is not one of those novels.🤮🤮🤮

It’s just another novel about a mc being sent back in time to play a game. Normally I like novels like this but this one is about as cliche as it gets.

Other than a few minor translation errors in the first few chapters I have no complaints about this novel it’s extremely well translated.

While I wasn’t exactly a fan of the MC’s backstory as it was a little over the top, I have to say that I do like where this story is going.

I honestly liked this story but the author got a little too wishywashy about weather they should stick to cannon despite the fact that it’s already heavily AU. This was a 10 out of 5 before chapter 35, after it though it’s a 2 out of 5 at best.

I like the concept but the English is so broken that it gave me a headache 🤕

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Thank you for creating this wonderful piece of art, it is truly one of the best FanFictions I’ve ever read. While I would love to join the masses in pushing for more chapters I know that you’ve just lost a parent and need to grieve, take your time i just hope that when you’re feeling better that you’ll come back and continue this masterpiece.

Shopkeeper stories are the best fanfics, I was a little skeptical about the non human protagonist but this story really pulls it off. I just hope there’ll be more chapters released.

Why are people so horny these days? It’s like every new fanfic is nothing but smut lately. This novel has a good system but it’s ruined by all of the smut happening every other paragraph.

I loved the concept of this novel the system is amazing and the first fifty chapters or so were so good but unfortunately after that it devolved into nothing but nationalism and face slapping that you normally see in modern day Chinese novels, I kept reading for another hundred chapters or so hoping that it would get back on track but no luck. I sincerely hope that someone makes another novel with a similar system and that it doesn’t devolve into pointless nonsense.

It was fine up until about chapter 100 then upon jumping to a new world the MC developed a split personality disorder and started acting completely out of character.