Darius_Chromwell
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Honestly the story started out fine. I like the villain with a plot changing system type of story, but there are so many plot holes and inconsistencies especially in the later chapters I had to give up on reading it before making it to chapter 50. I think it’s a great first draft for a story but the author should probably use it as just that. I would love to see it rewritten and have those plot holes filled.
The story is decent up until they introduce the fact that there are multiple reincarnated characters all who have fragments of the MC’s system. That in itself doesn’t ruin the story but it’s more the fact that almost all of the rest of the story is written in the perspective of those other reincarnated characters, after reading around 200 chapters I don’t think the author even remembers who the MC is anymore.
I like the idea of a gatcha power but the fact that it’s a common ability in the world is a disappointment even if his is better. I very much like the world background I’m a huge fan of novels like infinite mana in the apocalypse so a system world with awakeners and randomly appearing dungeons is very appealing. What I absolutely hate is the MC he’s a complete pushover and that alone makes it almost unreadable for me not to mention the fact that he comes with all of his gatcha summons pre-unlocked which completely makes the gatcha aspect pointless it would be better to just call him a summoner.
Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy. Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.
If you can get past the weird use of [] instead of “” it’s a fairly good fanfic up until around chapter sixty after which you start seeing the normal problems that quickly ruin a good story such as huge nerfs to the MC or extremely cheap and forced romance that takes less than a chapter to develop into undying love.