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Great read. Overall the execution of the novel is solid from the very first chapter. It's nice to see that the author utilizes the showing technique within their writing, allowing us the reader to think for ourselves about what the plot is about, how the characters are, as well as the overall setting. Recommended for readers who enjoy an fast paced plot and engaging action scenes.
Shuqin is a bit outnumbered in her attempts at happiness, but struggles through it. Doing what's right and good for others is hard to do when a tag team of mother and daughter have an axe to grind. Struggle is what makes a good story happen. Characters are always doing something that drives the story. Elements I like that can keep me engaged.
The writing quality is good and easy to understand but there is some room improvement that can be done as the story moves on. The updates look stable, it's just the start so best of luck for the author!!!!!! The story development is very well and the aspects that need to be presented is shown very well like 88 = bye-bye sent as hi :P The character design is also good and interesting I think it will be better as the story moves on The world is the modern world but the story makes it very interesting. Overall it is a very good story and the plot and the characters are very interesting and this will definitely keep readers entertained :)
I was amazed by the genre at first. Magical realism is not an easy thing to create and the author really made the story well. For me, the story shows me how that person has a different perspective and it is what I need. thank you and keep writing, author. Don't worry about your English is not your first language. What matters is your story is understandable. my English is definitely worse than yours lol. I am also an author. Please kindly check out my novel, Nan's Dream and Secret and Ingeniosus Snilldech Academy! Thank you, I'd really appreciate it :D