Reviews of My Faᵵe System
My Faᵵe System
MellowGuy
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Well, this is a 1st. for me... I feel compelled to write this review based not on the story i read so far but on the actual reviews posted. I do not mean 2 offend when i say in reply to some comments. #1 Spend less time doing your math homework//proving how clever you are by talking about odds calculation accuracy #2 Spend your time learning that human character-behaviour, (unlike odds), is not easy to define or quantify. Character is formed//behaviour is determined by nature vs. nurture, life experience, environmental influence, personal propensity to act & react (according to innate traits). You do not need a rule-book or psych. degree. As humans we are constantly evolving, learning, changing & adapting. Be patient, read story to the end. Only then will you come to understand MC. That is the beauty of the story. Character development & growth, not fancy maths. But that is just me. As i said no offence, just give the story more time. Also, how we act does not always equate how we feel. Complex characters need time & space to grow. As do we. Let us support Author's hard work and encourage through honest, respectful words of assessment//opinion. I am not an expert in any field, just a simple reader. Please excuse my rant. Wish you all a happy & safe read during covid times & beyond.
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The Writing is sometimes clunky but the gramar is exelent and within 5 stars. Updates are rather stable every 1-2 days. The story development seems sometimes forced but is not bad. The MC is a combination of brooding dark and every one for himself and then still some good within. This could make for an interesting complicated character, but in this case it didn't work for me. It might be because the MC is so over the top of edgelord that it just doesn't work for me when he hates others for helping him without expecting benefits and refuses to even give a simple thank you while helping others for no benefits. The World would be prety interesting without the fate system. If one of the core concepts of your system is manipulation of probability you should get probability at least remotely right. In this story, if the probability of an event, the MC wants to hapen, is beyond 50% it hapens. If it is less it might hapen. (Like the same event has 16 times in a row an outcome with a 75% probability(and I probably did not count all of them)).
Interesting world building premise as well as a nice diversity of interesting powers. Characters are very obviously good or bad, if they’re bad they’re narrow-minded bullies who act irrationally constantly, if they’re good they range from cliche to interesting. Main character quickly becomes better than everyone else at everything within a couple chapters, whether it’s something trivial or not, and has a SSS++ event/item handed to him every couple chapters. To me the story lacks good writing. Could be a fun read but author is too quick to jump into powering up the MC and getting back at bullies.
A very good novel so far (chapter 150). The MC is a cynical survivor trying his best to prevent a catastrophe The scars of what occurred in his first life also mold the way the MC reacts and behaves. It's logical and there plot armour is invisible making the story engaging, the side characters are fully fleshed out and don't exist only to praise the MC or be stepping stones. Pacing is very good ie. The MC doesn't level up everytime he turns around. So non of the usual webnovel nonsense 😏
Very interesting story where the main protagonist has unusual character and background. The story describes the fate of Nikol, who was hated by people in his past life. This time he got a chance to chance his fate. Killing, stealing and planning...Nikol is boy, who will dominate the world. The story is very simple, but interesting :)
