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hydraspare9mthCommentedBut I dont think ive offended you…?
"I knew you would be back soon, so I have already prepared a reward for you. I hope it will help you in your travels." Jafa smiled broadly as he extended his hand forward, "Here, take it. I'm not rich, but I don't think I've offended you. Moreover, I know many people in this village and region, so I will tell everyone that a nice guy like you has turned up here."- hydraspare9mthCommented
Idk who bet they weren’t real family but hey bro just won
They had both been orphans and over the many years in the orphanage they had become a real family, so as soon as Zayne got home, he immediately took Mia in with him. - hydraspare9mthCommented
Blank card…?
'Fine, now it's time to check what I got by taking the blank map.' Zayne reminded himself, stepped forward, and opened his inventory. - hydraspare9mthCommented
a title
'I got Title...? Damn... I wasn't expecting this, but it's supposed to be cool, isn't it?' Zayne inwardly muttered as an excited smile appeared on his face. - hydraspare9mthCommented
gets a class*
"No. No one gets Class at the beginning of their journey. Each player will decide which path to take, though you're right to some extent." The man said calmly as he leaned back in his chair with his arms crossed. - hydraspare9mthCommented
Maybe change this sentence? Seems kinda weird
"You're ready now, aren't you?" Zayne asked with a calm look as he leaned back in the chair. - hydraspare9mthReplied to nvanattia
No
"Ah... Sorry, I was just distracted." Zayne muttered in embarrassment, scratched the back of his head with a slight smile, and picked up the flowers. He opened his umbrella and headed forward, on the way illuminated by dim streetlights. - hydraspare10mthCommented
these*
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Missing a dot
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going to*
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fainter?
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were a lot of minor and broad informations*
There was a lot of minor and broad information that he needed to note down, too. Arthur didn't trust his memory to retain it forever. It would be a big loss for him if he forgot something really important. - hydraspare10mthCommented
it could*
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So a region locked quest gives the best class? Also regions? There are ons of regions like wayyyy too many to make quests for each no?
Some quests were simply region-specific or even region locked. - hydraspare10mthCommented
So um. Does hypnotek own banks? Else who would actually loan 100k
With the loan scheme that Hypnotek had come up with, getting enough money to buy their new Dream Pod V3 was as easy as verifying one's ID and signing a single document. - hydraspare10mthCommented
True leadership
"Alright. We are going, then. If we aren't back after two hours… well, I am not going to lie, if something manages to kill me, then all of you will probably die soon, too. So, there's nothing much you'll be able to do at that point." - hydraspare1yrCommented
Isnt end game supposed to be end game? And not early game?
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was*
Hopefully, he hadn't damaged the battery pack. The whole hoax would be worthless if the tool were broken. - hydraspare1yrCommented
Took him aback
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