i realllllly wanted to stay, ii anted to dive into the world and power syatem that the reviews so highly praised but my god i can't stand moustache twirling villains. Or a wannabe edgy mc(not that i can hate him for it, he's literally 16) the writing is good though, description wise and style is phenomenal for this site so i applaud author for that. i might come back to it when i'm drunk. anw thanks for publishing author!

yum.. a unhealthy amount of info dump. me love (i physically cringed when i read the seizure part- if he was as broken as u say, he would have lost all logic and went for the tridents as a dud. obv he got rescued before he gets himself killed and thats how u 'show' he's as defective as he is mentally rather than tell us abt a 'seizure') anw that's my two cents on it

this is not a review, it is just blatant hate. can you describe why you didn't like it w/o the sass, mate?

i read the last paragraph and the 10 y/o actually tells his friend to take him home b4 the cops (and i repeat THE COPS) arrive. sure, we've all fled from the law enforcers once or twice when we were a decade old, it's whtvz (ik im getting way too agitated over this but i just can't fathom how no one said anything yet anw imma stop whining now)

gods i wanna was my eyeballs with detergent after reading this blasphemy

lol you should too

so good, thanks for the chp!

okay i'm dropping this. the dude literally can buy all amd whtv skills he needs? tf does he have unlimited coins or smth? meh

why is he taking it so well? does he get summoned into another world every other weekend or smth? jesus. second work of author is DEFINITELY better than this.

ik this is completed. i am actually reading this bcz of author's newer story(def recommend, masterpiece). anw dude thought he was in VR w/o putting on the headset? and he just shrugged off the fact that they know his REAL name even tho he did not give it? yeah whtvs everyday things to him ig

but he won't. he gave up. he's a bully, not an assassin on a mission for god's sake. you need to remember that he's just a kid who likes to prey on the weak to make himself feel strong. nothing more

he just jumped into the monolith w/o informing his bro? at first i thought he would come back and tell cyrus after the tutorial but it seems like he rly left the latter on earth... why? the guy must be searching for u.. tsk

slow paced but intriguing so far. the upday stability though... :')

i just realized. his last name is salvatore and there's a vampire tag. mc also has an older brother. *FLASHBACKS*

i dropped it after 13 chps. first of all, this is an uncanny copy of the novel's extra. the plot holes are many even at the beginning of the story. the mc (who was a shut in, never exercised in his life ect) just got dumped into his own novel. quickly became this unshakablly willed man who could do superhuman feats (happens in chp4 or 6? i forgot the nb but it's extremely soon) he's dumb, i was quite excited abt his sword art but just couldn't bare with the unrealisim / 1D characters/ swayed morals (in one chp he's not interested in minor girls cz he's old mentally, the other he's sad cz he couldn't see them in skimpy clothes) i just can't with the inconsistencies. the teachers don't act like teachers, for some reason a genius teenager who won a nobel was still attending highschool with them ect... does it get better? hopefully. will i stay longer to see it? no. i already wasted enough time. at least grammar is above average.

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yeyy, gr8 chp

more i just caught up pwease this is gold

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