Reviews of Multiverse of Marvel

I did not enjoy the story because the mc does not gain any personal strength,also author I understand some stories are not for everyone.

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Good grammar, nice idea for fanfic, nice story, cant wait for more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The writing is just so bad. I liked the idea for the story but the actual writing ability doesn't hold up. Even skimming it wasn't worth it.

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I feel like the MC just depended on others, He could have taken over their powers and could have been a stand-alone hero which makes more sense and doesn't affect the plot as a whole, and will be more interesting to know about the influence of a self-made character than an existing one.

The novel is good .

Protagonist(male) gets impregnated by an alien and gives аnаl birth to 18 giants bugs (yes, seriously). 10/10 writing

I LOVE THIS NOVEL I LOVE THE AUTHOR EVERYONE WHO COMPLAINING I HOPE YOU GET YOUR EYEBALLS PULLED OUT WITH A FORK SERIOUSLY IF YOUR IN DOUBT WETHER TO READ OR NOT JUST DO IT YOU AIN'T GONNA REGRET

I can call John the emperor of mankind (Marvel version) because he taught many people how to do this and that, whose knowledge comes from a different multiverse.

Started good, but mc wants to save everyone and has some kind of no-kill rule like that of dc. Maybe author is a fan of dc. But this is not my cup of tea.

truth to be told I can't believe I was hesitating for reading this awesome FF the best part is whatever author said came true like he said "after 60 chapter the story would be not too much cringe" and truly after 60 chapter I liked reading this FF some people wanted romance (though I don't wanted) so author inserted her but many people didn't like that and felt she is not good and author said "she would not interfere with story to much and don't make it annoying after sometime" and it came true!!! Now one of the best part of this FF is, it isn't chaotic like in many FF (not every FF ofcourse) where this type of system or multiverse travel is present it goes in a very systematic order and another thing is that you don't have to fear like if you haven't read comics you won't understand bcz many things are explained inthis FF so there is basically no confusion for me atleast ... And for those who say that our mc doesn't have his own power then you haven't read it yet !! And the last part I love it !!!!!

The start was kind of weird since he drew all of the Lion King (or maybe it was a rough animatic?) in 15 days. It was never mentioned that he was an artist or atleast good at art in his last life nor did it explain how he remembered all of the Lion King. It’s (maybe?) explained later because he can buy the original stories but it was never mentioned in the beginning. The MC also makes some kind of dumb decisions. He could, instead of fighting on the frontlines, be just commanding his summons but I guess that’s just his preference. He also told SHIELD about his powers (for no reason explained) but BS’d about it being alternate worlds merging with the universe which I guess is fine. The grammar is fine but it kinda throwa me off at some points (like it feels like a polished Chinese novel at some points) and there are hardly any spelling mistakes. The plot is pretty slow with the MC releasing movies and most of the MCU movies being done in a few chapters (which is nice). Writing Quality 3/5 Updating Stability 5/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 3/5 World Background 5/5

It's a good fanfiction but when the romance stuff started it became just cringy and stupid. Honestly just wish you stuck with you original idea of him. But unfortunately you didn't... and now there is just a bunch of cringe whenever he is with Emma. My point is the romance ruined the good mood the story had. By the way if any of you readers bash Me cause you like the relationship and cringy romance you can go **** yourselves. I don't blame the author for the romance situation. He probably did it because he wanted to... or the readers kept hounding the for him to. Just my personal review 😌

The story is pretty cool, it's not perfect. The power of the MC is primarily to bring in characters from another world, nothing flashy or impressive. Since I'm a non-SHIELDRA fan and live to annoy Fury, this story didn't live up to my fantasies 🥺 but it doesn't matter. Bringing in full characters like Batman isn't really impressive because it has nothing to do with MC, it would have been pretty cool to bring Batsy's technology, that knowledge ect but anyway. I got to the middle of the published chapters, I'll finish the rest another time. For a first history, it's really good, congratulations to the author. You can be proud of yourself💙

Que história espetacular por favor não deixe morrer eu sou muito fã disso ela está muito bem trabalhada nem consigo descrever direito só agradecer mesmo obrigado

Honestly I didn't know what to expect early on when I got the feel of the story, I assumed maybe it being cluttered at the lease. but against expectations the story has kept me hooked and liking it more and more each chapter. Its flowed exceedingly well considering the obstacle of using your own imagination to combine worlds in a unique and entertaining way. multiple angles of perspectives/personas from the MC that work well. I like the socialness too, most fanfics have MC freaks with no emotions or friends, or worse just rage. lol this MC could have real layers of who he really is in the future. its all looking good so far, keep it up.

somewhere around chapter 300, the system updates is the last time he gets free powers and he did not get any power besides alien x after that till last 600 chapters it get boring after as he was not powering up just only summons and technology or ships. it was so frustrating he was not getting any more power and he been only using alien x, that he can't even use less than 2-5mins. it was so slow I'm dropping this it was good but he was not getting stronger while op enemies are appearing one after another without him getting more powerful and he can't even fight the new enemies alone as they were scaling in power as new came out while he is stuck with alien x and tech and his alien x are weak compare to like multiversal enemy he was facing.

The story is great and I really like it, but I believe it would have been better if the author focused on the smaller stuffs instead. As at some point in time, the story gets covered in too many summoned people. To the point that I might not even know some of them, and it removes the fun in the story.And rather than a perfect plot, it feelsmore like the characters are jus waiting for the next villain to conquer.I would have liked it more if it just ended with the death of thanos, there is really no great reason to go too far in the marvel lore.

This is ONE OF THE BEST MARVEL FANFIC I'VE EVER READ BEFORE!! Keep up the work author! Don't let judgment and criticism from others get the best on you. Just ignored those. You have POTENTIAL to go BEYOND!