Review Detail of tjkkwk in Multiverse of Marvel
Review detail
The start was kind of weird since he drew all of the Lion King (or maybe it was a rough animatic?) in 15 days. It was never mentioned that he was an artist or atleast good at art in his last life nor did it explain how he remembered all of the Lion King. It’s (maybe?) explained later because he can buy the original stories but it was never mentioned in the beginning. The MC also makes some kind of dumb decisions. He could, instead of fighting on the frontlines, be just commanding his summons but I guess that’s just his preference. He also told SHIELD about his powers (for no reason explained) but BS’d about it being alternate worlds merging with the universe which I guess is fine. The grammar is fine but it kinda throwa me off at some points (like it feels like a polished Chinese novel at some points) and there are hardly any spelling mistakes. The plot is pretty slow with the MC releasing movies and most of the MCU movies being done in a few chapters (which is nice). Writing Quality 3/5 Updating Stability 5/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 3/5 World Background 5/5
Multiverse of Marvel
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what was the explanation for the drawing part (unless its the part where he can get the movies from the system)?
thelightedghost:I did explain the drawing part.
tjkkwk:what was the explanation for the drawing part (unless its the part where he can get the movies from the system)?