It's a good fanfiction but when the romance stuff started it became just cringy and stupid. Honestly just wish you stuck with you original idea of him. But unfortunately you didn't... and now there is just a bunch of cringe whenever he is with Emma. My point is the romance ruined the good mood the story had. By the way if any of you readers bash Me cause you like the relationship and cringy romance you can go **** yourselves. I don't blame the author for the romance situation. He probably did it because he wanted to... or the readers kept hounding the for him to. Just my personal review đ
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