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Hello, Positive: 1. Good plot, with sort of novelty, and good description of background 2. Its good mc empire is op and in same time has enough strong oponent so its has to evolve constantly 3. There is big space for improvement for mc and his empire 4. Its enjoyable to read apart in one point in negatives, story itself is novelty to genre i didnt read anything similar to this point, which is good. Negative 1. I can point out, the novel need editing, english is put out as from just google translate without any sort of edit. Its a pity, could be really great work. 2. No more negative apart edit stuff :) Thanks author for your novel
I am just starting the novel and already Falls victim to The usual problems with novels on this website. 1. Lack of editing Syntex and grammar use is terrible. To the point of Being almost unreadable. 2. Aurthor Is writting as he goes and tends to forget Or change pass events guess that's him trying to edit and make it more readable 3. The aurthor also does no research and confuses WW1 with WW2 Becuase the author doesnt know the difference between the weapons and conflict. 4. Lack of world building makes the story bland and tastless. I love MIlitary Sytem novels and welcome more novels of the sort and new aurthors who make them and applud the novel anyway but its not that good.