wow, thumbs up, logical, i like surprises :D

i see, thats something new, i didnt expect that, nice

whats thats?

for 15 yo he is rlly tall, its practicaly adult...he grown up rlly fast, be 10-15 cm shorter will be more normal, but never mind, compared to some basketball freaks, he is pretty much normal

Gatusso, wow that rlly old pal :)

yeee.... you dont even kiss before marriage, dont make me laugh pls.....

i forgot to mention only one thing which i found strange, we know of Izans succes, all things written are about succes logicaly its fine and you want to see succesfull MC, but story would be good even if you see some hiw fails. mb fail of his 1 on 1 where his team get down by one goal after and in some way he excell in rest of match and win afterwards. just see some struggles of his too. but thats is just again my personal feelings which i forgot mention in review. thats all, and sorry for some grammars, i am bad writter on phone :D

Hello, review time. first of all i usually writte review, if i writte one, between 50-150 chapters not so early, but as i read authors notice of it will help hus story i will do so. as this story should have attention of readers, at least those who love football. so, i do in seriousness: writting quality: 5* - even if you can find there some grammar wrongdoings, they are so little or not so important that you will have any problem to understand story or it will not annoy you in any way. author even stopped using weeks to his aging, and puting only age there, so there are no more confusion, so i dont find needs to lower rating there. . Story development: 5* story is focused on football, which i consider right thing to do, mean there arent to many neccesary part pf story which would be usseless a little of slice of life there is is fine as its in good chemistry with the football part of story. even his girlfriend (not officialy yet) and his mon has some show up but not to much that it would postpone the story, which i find with great appreciation, so its all good. only note which i find a bit a pity is, POV of others persons. what i mean, for example commentator of matches are done well and trainers too, occasionaly spectators too, that is all well. but to side story for example there is mentioned clubs like chealsea, barca, real are curious about MC, well if its true, why not put some managers talk out there, or some club happening in backstage out of Izan knowing it, well just thats is my feeling, but overall story is developing in fine and good way, so thumbs up. btw you can even see author, how he is getting better, mb not in each chapter but when you see start of story and see ch.20+ for example i can see the developement of author himself (positively) well next. . Character design: 5*. Izan is good boy for me, he, he isnt stupid, but clever. but now what i found somehow surprised author put that he is good in study which i am surprised, not that those who do atletics ar edimb but doing top of class is rlly rare. but i dont mind it, as he as character rlly do things as smartass, he rlly upping his stats in overall way which is not bad to do, just i already mentioned in some comments, he should also focus on some stat where he will be original and one of the best in team, for example 30 percent of his point to give always to this stat (passing, dribling, avaranes whatever choosen) and 70 percent giving to his overall grow up, but thats just how i feel he should do, i am not author so whatever :D you will rlly like Izan anyway. other characters, well i think they are put there, and i dont feel like they have to small time of show up, by me its in optimal way. next up. . updating stability: for now i will give 5*, story is new and is updated rlly well i just hope author will keep it up a d dont drop it. . world background: 4* true be told, apart that its mentioned its post messi and ronaldo era, we dont know anything about happenings in the world at all, not that we need it right now, but i cant give full rate here, as there were a lot of great guys in football, and we dont even know if we see them in story as of now, even as a managers for example, Pavel Nedvěd, star of Lazio, after Juventus who went do job for his club as manager in Juventus, i know i mention someone from my country but i put it as example, but story is in early stage mb we will see Manager Messi, Ronaldo, Cole or others in it in future. who know :D so thats only stat where i lower rating for story. . Overall story is great and even if author go premium, i plan to read it, and in my clear conscience i can recomend this story for reading. i personaly when i have 3 power stones rdy i always give 1 to this story alongside two others i rlly like to read curently. So thanks Author for your work, for story you showing up, and pleas dont drop it.

nice

thx for the chapter i was thinking, if he will show up for senior team, shouldnt he max out some stat to be exceptional in team in something, like pasing or dribling, to do crucial passes, or be good at 1 on 1 as for now he will be under avarage if put agains adults so it would be good to be better in something if he just gradualy up his stat overall it take a longer time to be as good as them, but if he will be best in sone area, he will get oportunity more. just though all is in hand of author i just thinking aloud. (be genius in passes in senior team sounds good :D before he will be ace of team in overall stats.) looking forward to what you bring to us author.

if novel is good i dont mind spending though but ok

dont you know why i cant vote you golden ticket i had 3 i put two to other two favorite novels i have but third i want to give here but cant and wonder why this option isnt here

dear author, i rlly like your story but i cant help it, and mention it again, you put izan stats in this chapter 22 two times and behind his age you put weeks to his 15 yo. again as in previous chapters the weeks there are different, its rlly confusing, always even in previous chapter there were strange differences.... my advice to you dear author, just stop it, its confusing for you its better if you put just his year age there and left out the weeks totaly, it will stop to be confusing. btw to guy up there olivia is fine, its youthfull love so cute and sweet, nothing to worry about there...

just uff glad you back

seems its dropped :/ or not?

its practicaly grown up heigh already ...

.... no.....

pleas no dont make him some monster who is grown up more than his age should be, and its more chalanging to be smaller then opponents and make them run for their money than some 'not normal growth' thingy

its first game and he got rlly a lot of points isnt it to fast?? he will be alien player already at his 16 in this way i know make him rlly strong but i hope these getting is for achievements of first goal and assist etc. only as it will be rlly too fast... i like him got stronger but i hope author has plans and dont rush things to have room for later grow up. beside thats thx for chapters.

her son not his :D but its okey we can understand as english is not primary language of yours and we got the message i just posting if you decide correct it