Review Detail of Tadeas_Manzel in Military System god realm revolution

Hello, Positive: 1. Good plot, with sort of novelty, and good description of background 2. Its good mc empire is op and in same time has enough strong oponent so its has to evolve constantly 3. There is big space for improvement for mc and his empire 4. Its enjoyable to read apart in one point in negatives, story itself is novelty to genre i didnt read anything similar to this point, which is good. Negative 1. I can point out, the novel need editing, english is put out as from just google translate without any sort of edit. Its a pity, could be really great work. 2. No more negative apart edit stuff :) Thanks author for your novel