NotASpy
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NotASpy4mthReplied to HellBoyMCCh 379 A Lesson in Obedience- NotASpy4mthReplied to Sasuke_Singh
That’ less annoying then Ves Constatntly going on self finding missions, basically running away. Then coming back and being upset people moved on. On top of it not learning anything about himself at all. Also why is he so mad at his GF for her religion being woman dominated but still leaning on her for resources when hes running away.
- NotASpy10mthReplied to Rajat_Sharma_0663
- NotASpy11mthCommentedCh 379 A Lesson in Obedience
- NotASpy1yrCommentedCh 125 Adela's Plea
- NotASpy1yrPosted
Ok i am jumping right into the dislikes because the author does it a lot. Overexplaining, author will take 4 chapters to explain simple economics or a simple part of Dragon Cities lore. Honestly a lot of auttgors do it on this site because they dont storyboard and lose track of the narrative every other chap but i think this author just wants the word count. due to that the story doesn’t proceed to about the 100th chap, Hang in there if you can afford to get that far into it on this sight if not id suggest another novel with an author who doesnt write like hes explaining Calculus to a child.
- NotASpy1yrCommentedCh 244 ALIVE
- NotASpy1yrPosted
I am just starting the novel and already Falls victim to The usual problems with novels on this website. 1. Lack of editing Syntex and grammar use is terrible. To the point of Being almost unreadable. 2. Aurthor Is writting as he goes and tends to forget Or change pass events guess that's him trying to edit and make it more readable 3. The aurthor also does no research and confuses WW1 with WW2 Becuase the author doesnt know the difference between the weapons and conflict. 4. Lack of world building makes the story bland and tastless. I love MIlitary Sytem novels and welcome more novels of the sort and new aurthors who make them and applud the novel anyway but its not that good.
- NotASpy2yrCommented
You think the author means in story time? Lol nah hes literally going to take 30 years.
Ves envisioned a possible future where the LMC became a dominant mech company in the Bright Republic. It might happen twenty, thirty or even fifty years from now, but there would come a time where his company and his mechs obtained a huge amount of market share in the domestic mech market! - NotASpy2yrCommented
Lol what about the other mech pilots they good?
"Jannzi Larkinson broke through!" - NotASpy2yrCommentedCh 1124 Thuggish Conduct
- NotASpy2yrCommented
Hope by force, like I hope i am not forced to pop a cap in this fool?
"Ah, that is one of young Mato King's most recent works." Dias said appreciatively. "Mato King is a relatively young gunsmith, but he has already started to make a splash in the Bentheim gun community. The weapon you are holding in hands is called the Hope by Force." - NotASpy2yrCommented
She hit him with that Rebel leadr logic...
"Well, the government obviously didn't care before you came along. Shouldn't that be enough to put you in charge?" - NotASpy2yrCommented
Wow ves that was almost funny.
"It's not fat. It's large and in charge." Ves replied, putting a positive spin on his draft design's imposing bulk. "My new design isn't meant to look pretty. It's meant to offer the maximum amount of protection for its size. Let me explain to you all what the polarizing module brings to the table." - NotASpy2yrCommented
Lol this is Ves we are talking about. He doesnt care about the test subject.
If Ves forced the merger of incorrectly attributed spiritual energy with the emotions and desires of a mech pilot, then he might even inflict major harm! - NotASpy2yrCommented
Hes aa better written character then Ves actually.
Lucky wasn't stupid enough to remain within the vault. The cat took advantage of his intangible state and instantly phased through the floor and fled deeper underground! - NotASpy2yrCommented
Why does he think put money into the local economy and community a bead idea?? Hes belived this for the last 1000 chapters.
He thought he made it clear that the LMC shouldn't waste its money on these feel-good projects. - NotASpy2yrCommentedCh 512 Too Much Success
