Review Detail of NotASpy in Military System god realm revolution

I am just starting the novel and already Falls victim to The usual problems with novels on this website. 1. Lack of editing Syntex and grammar use is terrible. To the point of Being almost unreadable. 2. Aurthor Is writting as he goes and tends to forget Or change pass events guess that's him trying to edit and make it more readable 3. The aurthor also does no research and confuses WW1 with WW2 Becuase the author doesnt know the difference between the weapons and conflict. 4. Lack of world building makes the story bland and tastless. I love MIlitary Sytem novels and welcome more novels of the sort and new aurthors who make them and applud the novel anyway but its not that good.