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it's kind of boring to compare to other stories, but i would recommend reading "as chronicas de vali masters" (everything missing here is there) the plot is forced to stay the same, even when the MC changes a lot (and this without any real justification , just padding), writing and development as a whole need a big improvement. and I'm not talking about changing the MC's personality, but about the author's own mistakes to force the story when I mention the other book
Not bad, but gets significantly worse as time goes on. In general the beginning was pretty good, the wishes were odd at first but they come together well later on, proving that the mc had a plan all along but as the story goes on, especially once the mc gets to VD:L it becomes significantly worse, characters (especially the mc) begin acting completely out of character, like they suddenly become different people. Very disappointing in general. Still at least the first 2/3's of the story is pretty good and worth your time even if that's not true for the last 1/3.
Its interesting....like I dont know jack **** about the universe MC is in..neither the characters but I am interested....so author bro.....maybe provided some info..cause I thought the mother was evil dude.......also just saying,..dont mix marvel and DC......just dont..**: MC seems too weak despite his OP wishes....keep him godlike....[anyone of his wishes could make him a god] Suggestion and worlds: OP MC....provide info for universe...add some romance and fluff but pls build it and no sad angsty tragic ****....keep it happy and fluff...just no wife stealing or moms....also if harem keep it small....also....if anime worlds pls go before cannon.... -Pirates of the carribean? -Frozen--you know whyππ -One piece [12 years before] -fairy tail [400 years before] -for the 2 worlds above..would be dope if MC self inserts instead of travelling
The grandfather thingy is just straight BS. Bor (which is Thorβs grandfather name) is supposed to be in hel cuz he died dishonorably and heβs vindictive, paranoid warmonger not some nice loving grandpa, even at one point Thor kills him after hela revives him but in Thorβs defence he didnβt know it was his granpa and Bor never mentioned to tell him that in the comics. You should just retcon the whole grandpa thing imo it just sounds stupid. Overall itβs a good fanfic if you ignore the little inconsistencies here and there.
Hellooo!! how are we? I just want to say that this novel gives me good vibes, I have not started it yet because I want to finish watching the series to have more information. I just wanted to ask the author for a little favor ... PLEASE make Katherine Pierce the love interest !! (if she hasn't yet), or some other villain ...
The story is great, the sequencing of events and worlds is a bit confusing but it's still tolerable and quite entertaining. The characters give a medium amount of growth through the story which seems nice and the mastery of each world or universe is astonishing and commendable. Now for the cons. The romance of the characters felt a bit empty. Like with Astrid and Kol where they fought and after that, they suddenly get to talk to each other. There was no drama with the reunion, there was no "missing you" thingy for couples despite them not seeing each other for centuries and there was a minimal amount of intimacy which never gave away if they made up or not. The biggest con though would be the Mikaelson name. I see no reason for the MC to be a Mikaelson with this type of storyline. The story would still be the same if the MC was just another MC with OP powers since the Mikaelson heritage wasn't that highlighted or even the family thing with the originals. The arc of the originals was so short it left no impact on the novel making it no sense for the novel to highlight him being a Mikaelson.